TPO32-Odd sounds
The lecture and the passage discuss the source of some weird sounds which have been heard by russian submarines few years ago. Although the passage claims that there are some explanations for these sounds, the speaker refutes these ideas through a number of reasons which will be described in this report.
First of all, the passage points out that these sound could be generated by the whales, which are living in North Atlantic and Arctic Ocean, to appealing opposite genders. The speaker, in contrast, rejects this by claiming that despite the submarines, these whales always live near the surface water. In addition, these whales could be detectable by the submarines' sonar.
Furthermore, unlike the passage which states that these sounds might be produced by giant squid and because not having skeleton, they cannot recognize by submarines' sonar; the speaker argues that this idea is not persuamable. These creatures have always lived on those area; however, these odds sounds just have been heard for 1 decades and after that these sound have been disappeared.
Finally, although the passage says that there might be another submarine which surveying the ocean secretly without recogonizing by the Russian's submarines, the professor disagrees by mentionin that the evidence shows that the source of the sounds moved around very quickly and changed its direction in different ways. Moreover, she states that the submarines do not produce such quack sounds. She also believes that even the newest submarines cannot move as fast as this sound source.
Through the reasons which have been described above, the passage claims are rejected by the professor.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'submarines'' or 'submarine's'?
Suggestion: submarines'; submarine's
...these whales could be detectable by the submarines sonar. Furthermore, unlike the passa...
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Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'submarines'' or 'submarine's'?
Suggestion: submarines'; submarine's
...ving skeleton, they cannot recognize by submarines sonar; the speaker argues that this ide...
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Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this area' or 'those areas'?
Suggestion: this area; those areas
...e. These creatures have always lived on those area; however, these odds sounds just have b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, in addition, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 265.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30943396226 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4142215404 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 145.348785872 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554716981132 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1884123139 49.2860985944 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.909090909 110.228320801 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 21.698381199 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06452816374 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307759963902 0.272083759551 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130582163689 0.0996497079465 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763286445977 0.0662205650399 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171259633367 0.162205337803 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089374452158 0.0443174109184 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.3589403974 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.2367328918 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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