celebrities opinion
It is an undeniable fact that famous people play an immense role in our lives. We read articles about their latest affairs, contributions they made to the society etc. But their impact on certain people differs. I think that celebrities have more influence on younger people than on older people. I will give some plausible examples to bolster my opinion.
Firstly, the difference in interests plays a conclusive role in this question. Young people tend to catch the tide of latest affairs and fashions to be cool in front of peers. For example, if I do not know what a celebrity said about a particular kind of clothing, I cannot keep up the conversation with classmates. In contrary, older people have already gone through the same stages of young life and now they want a peaceful and calm life.
Secondly, we always hear about celebrities’ brilliant achievements and extravagant enjoyment, which overstate the gorgeous part and understate the painstaking part. Young people tend to pursue such kind of life, but with little endeavor. Therefore, they are blinded by any word that their admired person says. Meanwhile, older people have a home, a job and a family and they do not need any opinions, because they already prosper in life.
Thirdly, celebrities' opinions are not relevant and interesting for older people, because they have lived many years, overcome many problems and have a lot of experience. They know how to handle certain situations and their opinions are already made. Older people even know about life much more than famous people do. Youth's views on live are only starting to be mold and young people need a source which they can obtain ideas and values from.
What conclusion can be drawn from this? In my opinion, young people are more vulnerable to celebrities' opinions, because they need support in making values and interests, while older people already know what they want from life. I think, that this problem will be forever in family and society, because this is a part of socializing and growing up.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, while, for example, i think, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98250728863 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62101881895 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542274052478 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5404622025 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.45 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.15 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162781643002 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050646131803 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729163620548 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106651471566 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467359786553 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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