Characteristics a good neighbor should possess
Neighbors are those who we can refer to as those who live close to us. They are integral people in the lives of everybody because we all have at least a neighbor in our lives. This reason makes it important to consider the characteristics expected from a good neighbor. In this essay I’ll explore two important qualities that is expected from a neighbor.
The first is that a neighbor should be someone who is supportive. Life can often be filled with unexpected events and sometimes we might not be around to be of help to people around us. A neighbor who is supportive can often be of help in this situation that can be referred to as unforeseen occurrence. For example, in the year 2013, my mum forgot to switch off an electric kettle before stepping out to go to the market. Unfortunately, this led to a fire incident that destroyed our kitchen. I also have my junior brother who is just 5yrs of age in his room taking a nap. Our neighbor noticed a smoke coming out of our kitchen quickly because our kitchen window is close to the external garden I and my neighbor shares. She immediately alerted the fire service and they broke the door to gain access into our house in other to quickly quench the fire. Before this, my neighbor has quickly gone to the bedroom to bring out my brother. We were able to have only our kitchen affected by this fire because of a supportive neighbor. As you can been able to help is an
important characteristic a neighbor should have.
Another is that a neighbor should be able to have respect for those who he / she lives with. In life we often face different challenges both at work or school. Our homes should be a safe haven we can run to in other to relax and have a good rest. A neighbor who is respectful would consider those who he/she lives with so as not to use his own activities to disturb others. For instance, after coming back from work, I often enjoy coming to have a hot shower and relax immediately because my work is a very stressful One that requires me to be awake very early in the morning. My neighbor is used to playing loud music in the night. After hinting them about how their loud music affects my sleep, they adjusted in that when they noticed I’m back from work in the evening they switch off there stereo which makes me sleep well and I’m able to get ready for work the next day. This experience thought me that respect is an important character a neighbor should possess.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that good neighbors are those who are supportive and respect those who live around them. Not only can they be of help on unforeseen circumstance, they can also make your home a safe haven to relax from the stressful condition faced at work or school environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, well, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2263.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 501.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51696606786 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52446718271 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447105788423 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 716.4 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5362593849 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.52 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.04 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233709335617 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818849949323 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872604612177 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194502665159 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12701374783 0.0645574589148 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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