Charitable organization if you want to donate money to people would you like to know if your money is spent directly on goods and services or leave it to organization decision
Donation’s ultimate goal is to provide a good welfare and standard life for needed people.” What comes around goes back around.” All of us will be grateful to theorganizations when they accept our donation as it will cherish our lives and makes us feel that we do something good in this hard life. If I were make donation for organization I would definitely never think about how and where they will spends my donation. So I strongly will leave the decision for this organization workers to make their mind and spent the money in the way they saw it properly for several reasons which I will explore in this essay.
To begin with, the organization have their experts to make decision of when, where, and who all liable to get the donation. Many organizations have a list of needed people and what they needs: therefore, it is more reliable to throw the ball in their field. For instance, heart purple, is a well known organization from many charitable one’s. Once I decided to make my donation, the responsible person ask me many questions like what you like how much you would to donate, for how many times, and if I need a reseat about the whole amount of my donation for tax return. This information that have been asked clearly illustrate how much those people are responsible on their works and how they do it perfectly. I understand this great job of this organization works wil be done surely perfectly in all aspects
In addition, since we decided to donate for this organization, surely we put our trust on them and it will be unethical to ask how they spent the money. These organizations are been in such a work for many years, they gain confidence of many peoples; therefore, these trust I believe are not come from nothing but in contrast, by their complete works. Besides, I can touch the enthusiasm in their spirits to help people no matter of their religion, ethnicity, or colors. For example, my father decided to donate his car when it gets broken after a bad accident. When he makes his decision he calls the organization to pick up the car after all arrangement for the time and date they ask him if he wants to change his mind. Furthermore, she send him by Email other organization’s names in order to see if he want to choose others from the list. This definitely represent those people are deal with wide variety of peole who ask foer donation and they gain their trust due to prolong contact and excellent work.
In sum, I personally believe those organizations are have expperts to make the coorect decision in how the money will spend besides, they are trustful people which we can completely depend on their honest jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, after all, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 77.0 43.0788530466 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70638297872 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76379620965 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504255319149 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 700.2 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3488679093 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.25 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.375 20.6045352989 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220735961936 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771289961952 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386897550626 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144017830744 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169757838738 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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