Childhood has got the best memories of our entire life. Every adult in their rudimentary stages is being pronounced to be one of the most wonderful creatures of the god so far. Everyone would embrace themselves cherishing their innocent, innocuous, naughty kind of things. Everyone does believe that our earlier stages of life are precious, however, few people debate that it is the stage where a child is oblivious about his/her actions and unable to perceive what is right and what is wrong. When we arrive at the stage of adulthood, there will be really innumerable things for an individual to look back at his/her childhood. Framing my perspective, I can say that childhood is considered to be one's euphoric stage of all time.
To start with my opinion, Nostalgia is one stage that everyone would come across that feeling. Unlike adulthood, childhood moments could be the most energizing way of improving the quality of life. children are so sweet in their own way being very cute while talking, no selfishness, unafraid of anything and even being naughty sometimes. they have the capability to lessen the worries of their family members and people around their vicinities. it's merely a pleasure to talk to them leaving all our sorrows aside. I can illustrate a good example of my childhood. my younger stages were really unforgettable till date. I even do remember the most naughty things like stealing the fruits from a fruit yard, breaking the window glasses while playing cricket, bunking for the school and complaints from my neighbors,etc., these things yield inevitable memories for me then, now and forever. those days happened to be a passing cloud in my life.
sometimes I wish to go back to my childhood stage and want to spend one more time in those golden days. childhood is described to be the god's greatest gift one could ever afford it for anything. it is priceless and inevitable. everyone's childhood is memorable with a bunch of memories like I had. the significance of this earlier stage can be known in the later period of our life. take for, Instance, I had been to many places with my family members when I was young. we used to go to a picnic and had some quality time spend together forgetting everything about the rest of the world. whereas I can not experience this sort of happiness when being an adult because of the work stress we have at this stage. when I get depressed or gloomy for some reasons, I just remind about my childhood days, as a result, I get boosted up and refreshed instantaneously.No stage can supersede the childhood. children are next to god whenever you see them just remind of your childhood that eventually brings a smile on your face and don't get long-faced with no reason!
For the aforementioned points, I can conclude that being experiencing childhood is a priceless gift one could have in our lives. It is literally incomplete without saying that there is no other stage that could equally compete with chiildhood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, really, so, then, whereas, while, kind of, sort of, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2468.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 511.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82974559687 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74844712035 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520547945205 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 769.5 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6928857925 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9230769231 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6538461538 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73076923077 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140814510373 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479081018344 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527678983192 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911620072088 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389679324039 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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