Childhood is all about being carefree. That time we doesn't think about the things. So, according to me childhood is the happiest time of a person's life.
As a child I din't need to think about the things like study, office, how to manage home and many more things. When I was a child the only thing about which I need to care about is going to school, complete my homework and playing. But as we grow up we have lot of things about which we need to care of. When we were child we doesn't care about the money. But now the most important thing is to earn money and mange all the expeses. As a child I never had to care about the money because I was satisfied with the things about which I already had and no more desire for the anything. As child, I never care about what people will think about me, what should I do and what should I not. But now things has been changed. There is social pressure on how should behave and act.
The best part of the childhood is the parent. They were always there for me to take care of the things. I still remember the days where I was preparing for the board exam and mom andad were more worried about me than me. I had so much of tension but deep down I know that they were there for me and they will always take care of me. Whenever I get sick, they were there for me. At the mid-night they used to take me to the hospital and took care of me. Whatever the worst condition is there they were there for me. Thats the thing which I like the most. There were no any responsibilties.
Children doesn't have any responsibilties. Children are more carefree and open minded. Chidren mind is open to everything. So, I think that childhood is the happiest time of a person's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17824773414 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19469718231 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.416918429003 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.872144578 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.32 100.406767564 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.24 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.08 5.45110844103 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119931924984 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605726404679 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163558477894 0.0737576698707 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180954011973 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181294784806 0.0645574589148 281% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.9 11.7677419355 42% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 58.1214874552 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.1575268817 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.08 10.9000537634 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.86 8.01818996416 73% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 86.8835125448 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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