Childhood is the happiest times of person's life

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Childhood is the happiest times of person's life

Life begins and ends with two worlds, one is birth and the other is death. There are many stages to reach from one world to another. Childhood, young, teenage, adult and old age are the different stages present in between the two worlds. I firmly believe that childhood is the best stage out of all. It is the stage where kids are kind and innocent with lot many smiles on face. Below are the reasons for my statement.
First, in this stage children won’t have any responsibilities. There won’t be any tensions instead only joy and laughter. There is no need to worry about homework, assignments and tests. My life is an example for this statement. From my primary school till undergraduate program, each and every day is horrible. Daily I used to do at least 3 home works. Apart from this at least one assignment daily. Sometimes I feel frustrated and decides to quit this kind of life. Suddenly I will think of my childhood days and forgets everything. I will get boosted up when I think of those days and happiness.
Second, everyone in the family takes the utmost care. Every single minute is peaceful without any fights. Each and every member of the family spends some quality of time with us. Nowadays it is very difficult to spend some time with family due to busy schedule. Our parents daily feed us, buys the clothes and toys which ever we ask. Children gets enough time to play with parents. During this stage children can go to parks, cinema theatres with their parents
Third, the most important thing is there is no place for children to work. They are not required for long hours to work. No need to accept the things which they don’t like. Moreover, children can make many new friends. Childhood friends are the best friends and god gifted friends with whom we can share our feelings and emotions. For example, I have many friends in my college and office days, but I didn’t feel comfortable in the way that I felt when I am with childhood friends. My best friend is the childhood friend whom I have met in my kindergarten.
Finally, I want to wrap up by stating that childhood time is the best period for people in their entire life. It is the period where one feels secured with no tensions. Their room is completely occupied with happiness and laughter.

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Average: 8.3 (4 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, third, apart from, at least, for example, i feel, i think, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64619164619 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45836571517 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53316953317 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.226743054 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.09375 100.406767564 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.71875 20.6045352989 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53125 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173215792943 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411011073099 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473467359836 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940369077045 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020228509965 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 11.7677419355 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.8 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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