To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
The thesis stated is “To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities”. I would like to provide my view in the below sentences.
As the good old cliché says “When you are in Rome, do as Romans do”. It is understood that Romans can be expected to behave in a manner that is represented by the city of Rome. Is this cliché still holds true in the current world? This may be questionable in the modern world because Rome would consists of people from various societies who would have settled due to some reasons. One of the reasons can be career. Therefore now it is extremely difficult for anyone to understand the characteristics of a society by just studying its major cities.
On the contrary, characteristics of any society is understood by studying its villages and small towns where the roots are still preserved. In ancient times, the major cities of any society depends upon economic, cultural and political centers of that society. Now a days it is not the same. Due to vast developments across the globe this definition has altered. People started migrating from one place to another in search of opportunities, power and money and so on. Any major city of the world would now consists of people of different nationality, community and race.
Can study of Paris helps us to understand the characteristics of France? Can the study of Mumbai and Bangalore helps us to evaluate the characteristics of India? The answer to all these questions is a big “NO”. Due to surplus opportunities, people started migrating to the capital cities of any country. Paris is now the home of popular designers, top models and garment manufactures who might have roots in other countries. As a result the study of Paris might not accurate to understand the characteristics of French society. Similar in the case of India. There can be high chances for inter race marriages due to affluent opportunities for the career growth. As a result the new generation contains both the traits of their parents. This makes even more confused to understand the characteristics of the present society.
In sharp contrast, the small villages and towns gives the real traits of that particular society. The villagers and other common people who are residing in the township would carry the characteristics by retaining the traditions which are passed to them by their ancestors. In ancient days due to lack of transport, people used to stay where their roots are originated. This lead to understand the characteristics more easily just by concentrating on the traditions and customs of the major cities.
As I have provided irrefutable evidence in support of stance, I would like to conclude my agreement by reiterating that to understand the traditions of the society it’s better to study more about its villages and township instead of major cities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'consist'
Suggestion: consist
... in the modern world because Rome would consists of people from various societies who wo...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...sons. One of the reasons can be career. Therefore now it is extremely difficult for anyon...
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
... and political centers of that society. Now a days it is not the same. Due to vast develop...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... political centers of that society. Now a days it is not the same. Due to vast develop...
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'consist'
Suggestion: consist
.... Any major city of the world would now consists of people of different nationality, com...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ho might have roots in other countries. As a result the study of Paris might not a...
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...nt opportunities for the career growth. As a result the new generation contains bo...
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Suggestion:
...tions and customs of the major cities. As I have provided irrefutable evidence ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, still, therefore, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2429.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 483.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02898550725 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05910272292 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461697722567 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 765.0 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2601149179 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7586206897 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6551724138 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.03448275862 5.21951772744 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359132809284 0.243740707755 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864457047923 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128172488288 0.0758088955206 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205116000594 0.150359130593 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115047350892 0.0667264976115 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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