Children can benefit a lot from taking care of pets
The past several decades have witnessed the booming pets' industry. A growing number of people have pets at home. This phenomenon triggers a heated debate that whether children could get benefits from keeping pets, which has never ceased and even gained further vigor. Some people harbor the opinion that there are a lot of advantages for children to have pets at home while the other individuals, however, view this issue from a different angle and conceive that kids should not be allowed to live with pets. Taking these two views into consideration, I highly sympathize with the former one and the following paragraphs will testify to the credibility of this argument.
To begin with, considering the most convincing reasons from the supporters, one must be stressed is that keeping pets is beneficial for children's mental health. Because pets play an essential role in children's lives, they can get rid of the sense of lonely. With the policy of "one family has one child" comes to China, most of the families just are allowed to have one kid at home. Under this circumstance, our children are bound to feel so lonely and boring due to they cannot stand a fair chance to have siblings. Thus, pets fix this imperfection and they become the best friends and companies for children. Whenever children feel depressed, upset or uncomfortable, they can turn to their pets for placing their emotion in order to feel better. Consequently, nobody could deny the importance of pets that can bring to children, especially pets make children's life more appealing and full of happy.
In addition, adopting pets can cultivate children's living skills and they could learn a lot of knowledge from it. As we know, when we bring pets home, we usually treat pets as our own babies. Children have the same feeling as well. They act as pets' mum or dad and teach pets how to behave properly at home. For instance, my best friend Jenny has a dog named Nina. When the first time that she brought Nina at home, she decided to teach Nina to pee in the restroom in order to have a good living habit. By training Nina, she also knew that she should behave like an adult, so she abandoned some impolite behaviors, such as speaking loudly in public place since she thought that if she made bad behaviors, her dog might do the same thing like her. In this way, she adopts many beneficial habits and proper behaviors. What's more, she learned a lot of living lessons from taking care of her dog, which is another benefit that keeping pets can bring.
Furthermore, a recent survey, conducted by Harvard University, after polling two thousand of people who often keep pets at home, reveals a significant percentage of the respondents, 87.5 percent, present that they cannot live without pets since pets are their family members. Besides that, one interviewee says, “ After having my dog, I become independently because I have the obligation to walk it, feed it and play with it every day. In this way, I don't need my parents' help since I can handle all things by myself."
Admittedly, some people may argue that keeping pets will disrupt children's attention which belongs to study because it is actually time-consuming. However, if parents guided children to spend time at a rational level, this situation should not be worried about. For instance, parents can set as an example to teach children that if they want to be an eligible parent, they should know how to manage their time and allocate their energy well. Only in this way can children have a brighter and happier life in the future.
To sum up, I strongly believe that children can benefit a lot from taking care of pets due to it can not only offer a helping hand for children's mental health but also children can learn some valuable lessons from it.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 9.8082437276 265% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 86.0 52.1666666667 165% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3158.0 1977.66487455 160% => OK
No of words: 657.0 407.700716846 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80669710807 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.06280665599 4.48103885553 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51452692279 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 331.0 212.727598566 156% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503805175038 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 969.3 618.680645161 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2989646722 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.785714286 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4642857143 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89285714286 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409631269018 0.236089414692 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119347647028 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129581809494 0.0737576698707 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254352943466 0.150856017488 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157927733573 0.0645574589148 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 86.8835125448 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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