The college years are the best time in a person’s life.
Each and everyone will have a different opinion but according to me, college years are indeed the best part of a persons life. It is my firm belief that people tend to enjoy more when they are in college, for a number of reasons which I will be explaining in subsequent paragraphs
First of all, the age at which we enter college grants us freedom from our parents that we might not have in high school, this, in turn, helps us do more fun things when we are with our friends. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. When I was in high school I was not allowed to go out with my friends or stay at their place for a night and contrary to this in college, I got to spend as much time I wanted. We all have heard different stories from people and even while narrating these stories they have a smile on their face and this depicts that college life is the best phase in a person's life.
Furthermore, we learn and mature from the problems and difficulties that we face in our college life. People change in many ways, for example, I have seen my friends become more responsible and efficient. Drawing from my own personal experience, I never used to save money and always used to be a spendthrift but this nature completely changed after I graduated. So, in my opinion, college is just not the best phase but also can be the best teacher.
Additionally, college life helps one to decide what he really wants to be in life, it actually paves the path toward success. It helps a person discover the talent and potential they have. I have seen many people who are not good in studies while they are in high school but in college, they exceptionally perform well and achieve great success in life.
In short college life helps a person develop in every manner and prepares them to face real-world problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, really, so, well, while, for example, in short, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49127906977 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43632921432 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517441860465 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.2991915413 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.846153846 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4615384615 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274629315115 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112121629113 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926344943288 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167951317338 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229830944939 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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