The college years are the best time in a person s life Agree or disagree | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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The college years are the best time in a person's life.

Agree or disagree.

All the students are eagrly waiting for theeir college days. Some people thinks that college life is the best time of the student's life. I agrre with that opinion of the people. I have a two reasons for that, which i will explian in following essay.

First of all, students get the full freedom in their college life. Most of the students are raised under the strick suervision of the parents. So, they enjoy this freedom in these days. To illustrate this my own example is enough. I completed my schooling from the near by institution. where i always have to follow some strict rule. At the same time this same condition at my house. As soon as i pletedd my schooling i went to college for my undergraduation. At this place i did not need to obey anu rule. As a result, of that i doing so much adventureois activity, which is not possible when i was at home.

Secondly, Students are coming in contact with many new people , make connection with them. This connection is very helpfull them in the future. This people are coming from the different region of the nation , sometime from the different continent also. For example, I completed my graduation from the State Agricultural University. Where most of the people is come to study from the different territory of the nation. Only few students are from local area. The are bringimg their own local snacks with them, when they coming back from the home after ending of holidays. Just because of that, I tasted too many dishes from the dofferent region of the nation.

In conclusion, I am in the fever that this college days is golden days of my life. Because it gives me freedom and make new connection in my life with many people.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...from the State Agricultural University. Where most of the people is come to study fro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 13.8261648746 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6059602649 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49455561953 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496688741722 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.4776611985 48.9658058833 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.9583333333 100.406767564 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5833333333 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 19.0 4.88709677419 389% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112416275003 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357049238076 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804639221381 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984459988955 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770246618367 0.0645574589148 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 11.7677419355 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.57 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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