The college years are the best time in a person's life. I agree with the statement because while being in college a person do not have to worry about the outside world. While in college, the person have to focus on studies only but when the person graduates, the seriousness of the life starts. The person have to think about social, personal and professional life.
When a person is in college the sole focus is on studies and it is their only responsibility but when the person is out of college, they will have myriads of responsibilities. They have to complete their work, be professional, be prepared for circumstances which could affect their life. They have the responsibility to keep their finances in check as well. During college years, a person can have fun like going out to parties and that too in high frequency and perform some extracurricular activities but the person once reaches adulthood and is out of college, Although they would go to parties, the frequency will be comparably low. Not only that but if their work load or work time is high then they wouldn't be able to work on their extracurricular activities.
The other important element which basically makes college life much better is not paying bills. Student don't have to pay bills. They do not have to worry about how they are going to afford the services by the end of the month. Nor they have to worry about that whether they will be able to pay the bills in time. As being Adult, we know the most important financial factor is Credit score, which a person have to worry about only when they have a job and money to pay back and usually students don't have to worry about loans as their parents have their back.
As mentioned above during the college life, a person is has more free time, they can explore the world. They could try anything and everything they want to do. For example, they could explore different career option. Moreover, a person could also make a mistake, Although it will have repercussion but it would not be as drastic as it would be when they are adult. They could skip classes, go out with friends, have such moments which they might not get to enjoy once they graduate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...he college years are the best time in a persons life. I agree with the statement becaus...
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Line 3, column 703, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ork load or work time is high then they wouldnt be able to work on their extracurricula...
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Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...uch better is not paying bills. Student dont have to pay bills. They do not have to ...
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Line 5, column 495, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... money to pay back and usually students dont have to worry about loans as their pare...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oans as their parents have their back. As mentioned above during the college li...
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Line 9, column 144, Rule ID: VERY_UNIQUE[1]
Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
...ing college years are something that is totally unique. Its the time of a person life, which t...
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Line 9, column 160, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...s are something that is totally unique. Its the time of a person life, which they w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60183066362 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43714721467 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425629290618 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4836054701 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7619047619 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8095238095 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.80952380952 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154288870011 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781457126384 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971557182706 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125072567681 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962902166705 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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