The turing test- Barron's(integrated essay)

To determine whether a computer can think or not, Alan Turing designed an experiment called Turing test. In this experiment, a person will ask question to a computer or another person by text or voice through terminal, and the response from the computer in return will be in text or synthesized voice. At the end, if people are not able to determine if the response was from computer or person, then the machine passed Turing Test. In 20th century many contest has been organized, one of them was organized by High Loebner with prize of gold medal and $100K for computer which passes Turing Test but none has prevailed.

The lecturer cites John doubt regarding the Turing test, stating that the machine considers behaviour rather than the thought. This is further exlpained by an example given my John, that is, If an English person has been asked a question in Chinese then without any reference or detailed comprehensible question, the person will manipulate the Chinese symmbols and answer incorrectly. Similarly for computers, if they are designed with complex inputs, they wouldn't be aware of their response. If it has enough references and has comprehended the question and answers accordingly, the machine will pass the Turing Test. Turing test is not accurate enough to determine whether the machine can think or not.

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Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 450, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun contest seems to be countable; consider using: 'many contests'.
Suggestion: many contests
...ine passed Turing Test. In 20th century many contest has been organized, one of them was org...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...hinese symmbols and answer incorrectly. Similarly for computers, if they are designed wit...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
... are designed with complex inputs, they wouldnt be aware of their response. If it has e...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, regarding, similarly, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 22.412803532 45% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 1373.03311258 81% => OK
No of words: 221.0 270.72406181 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01357466063 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62338877595 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570135746606 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 419.366225166 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1514887398 49.2860985944 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.111111111 110.228320801 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 21.698381199 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06452816374 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.09492273731 49% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16355153361 0.272083759551 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907151226131 0.0996497079465 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682249975311 0.0662205650399 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135818051126 0.162205337803 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00768604227754 0.0443174109184 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.3589403974 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 63.6247240618 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:

para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3

Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).

Don't need a conclusion paragraph.

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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