A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
Everything has two sides, one is bright and another is dark. Similarly, building a large factory near my community also has pros and cons. The decision to build a factory should be based on critical thinking. I support the proposal of the factory on the basis of following reasoning along it’s pros and cons.
On one hand, large scale factories need large areas to establish machinery and infrastructures. The factories also increase air as well as water pollution with residues after manufacturing and sometimes they abduct illegal properties. On the other hand, because of such projects nearby cities' economies rise and people get employment which is important for development. That’s why I am in favor of the factory and for pollution and land acquisition the government has strict rules for industrial production. The builders have to fulfill all demands according to government rules to start their factory and as a citizen we can also complain of pollution and illegal manufacturing.
In addition, increase in traffic and destruction in the calmness of the city is also to the disadvantage of the factory. According to my opinion huge projects need good transportation and communication facilities. These factories not only develop their own premises but also develop roads and take care of the beauty of the city. In India Jamshedpur is one of the perfect paragons of development by Jamshedji Tata. There are so many supporting examples which show wide-reaching companies spend funds for community development. Therefore, I will be welcome to such projects in my community.
Furthermore, an increase in population is also one of the fears that can come in people’s mind. As factories run, people from other cities migrate in our city and it makes our city populated and the rate of crime would escalate. This is a valid point but in the counter as the economy climbs because of factories the people get employment which helps them to improve their lifestyle. If I greet on such a broad project then other companies also start to accelerate near my community.
Conclusively, on the basis of reasoning I support the idea to build a large factory near my community. It is not a few days profit project in spite it gives long term benefits to my community and my community has rights to complain if any company tries to misuse my city.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 284, Rule ID: ABOUT_ITS_NN[25]
Message: Did you mean 'along its pros'?
Suggestion: along its pros
...ory on the basis of following reasoning along it’s pros and cons. On one hand, large scale fa...
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Line 2, column 290, Rule ID: IT_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: its
... the basis of following reasoning along it’s pros and cons. On one hand, large sca...
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Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... helps them to improve their lifestyle. If I greet on such a broad project then ot...
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Line 6, column 256, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ghts to complain if any company tries to misuse my city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, similarly, so, then, therefore, well, as to, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1960.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01278772379 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94316845699 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514066496164 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7559428973 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.619047619 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47619047619 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190012292613 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605880686199 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061516051604 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119609767268 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515233203502 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 284, Rule ID: ABOUT_ITS_NN[25]
Message: Did you mean 'along its pros'?
Suggestion: along its pros
...ory on the basis of following reasoning along it’s pros and cons. On one hand, large scale fa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 290, Rule ID: IT_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: its
... the basis of following reasoning along it’s pros and cons. On one hand, large sca...
^^^^
Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... helps them to improve their lifestyle. If I greet on such a broad project then ot...
^^
Line 6, column 256, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ghts to complain if any company tries to misuse my city.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, similarly, so, then, therefore, well, as to, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1960.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01278772379 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94316845699 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514066496164 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7559428973 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.619047619 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47619047619 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190012292613 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605880686199 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061516051604 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119609767268 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515233203502 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.