The issue here is whether building a large factory near my community is an advantage or a disadvantage. Large factories are usaullly a welcome, but sometimes entails some problem within; such as environmental, political issues. I personally support building a factory becayse there are more benefits over building a large factory near my community.
Firstly, more people can find their job when large factories are built. Globally, unemployment is aggravated and it not only has impact on youngsters but the whole demographic pie. To demonstrate, machines and AI are increasingly substituting human workforce. As more youngsters are unemployed, it is impossible for younger generation to suffice for the elder generations. New factories in our community will give job opportunities to many unemployeed ones, and motivate our community to flourish. Consequently, large factory near my community might solve a economic crisis over the decades.
In addition, new factory in our community will make our community a better place to live. In order to build a large factory, basic infrastructures such as new road, traffic system, more residential areas are crucial. Construction of a new factory will facilitate local investments and rennovation throughout our community. For instance, in my village, it is stated that medical center is necessary for every industrial workplace with over thousand people. Therefore, new health care centers will emerge, and incidentals like cafes and fitenss centers will appear. Our community will be a better, convinient place to live.
Third of all, our community will gain a new symbol that can identify our region. Every flourishing communities have their own symbol; IT industries for the Sillicon Valley, motor industires for Detroit, high skyscrapers and office towns for New york. Representing famous industries as a symbol for a community is a fun and effective way to promote. Yet, there are no promising image in our community other than a declining, worn-out feature. As a result, our community could floursih and regain life if a new industry can represent as a face of our community.
In conclusion, I believe that building a large factory near our community has more advantages than disadvantages for status quo. Statistically, employment rates and number of infrastructures will increase. Also, our community will regain our fame by a new, lively image of the new industry.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, third, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2053.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41688654354 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1590574061 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54617414248 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4504823461 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.2608695652 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4782608696 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.60869565217 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231103551896 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849012505843 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100349915766 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172331232242 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106762017618 0.0645574589148 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 58.1214874552 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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