A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
Industrialization is an essential aspect of any country’s economical growth. More industries in a country explicitly mean less poverty. I personally support the establishment of the factory near my community. Though it comes with some price to pay for environmental pollution, when proper measures are taken we can build industries in an effective way. I feel this way for the reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, Industries generate employment to the unemployed and increase their standard of living. According to recent studies, unemployment in India is in its peaks. It is necessary to create employment in one or another way. Industries are one of the well-known ways to create jobs. For instance, the factory which is under consideration for establishment in our community has the capability and infrastructure to provide jobs to almost ten thousand people. Many unemployed are going to get benefit out of it.
Secondly, the factories will improve the purchasing power of people. An indigenous product would come at a low price than products imported. This is because the price of indigenous products does not include any import taxes. Also, exporting the products would help to improve the GDP of the country. Ultimately, the citizens of the country will be benefited. For instance, smartphones like Apple mobiles which are made out of India are usually priced high in India due to taxes included to sell it. On the other hand, when it is manufactured in India we can get it for considerably low prices. This is the reason why iPhone SE 2020 model which is being manufactured in India comes at a relatively better price.
Finally, there are some disadvantages incorporated in the establishment of Industries. Industries are the major reason for many forms of pollution like air pollution, water pollution, and sound pollution. Generally, Industries are instructed to take proper measures to prevent pollution. Unfortunately, many industries overlook such instruction as they are very expensive. Industrial pollution has a profound effect on the environment over the long run. Industries can cause accidents on a large scale like the recent Meruit blast that devastated the entire city. Because of these reasons some people oppose the idea of factory establishments.
In conclusion, in my opinion, the advantages of a factory establishment overweigh the disadvantages that come with it. When stringent measures were taken those setbacks can be overcome.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...is an essential aspect of any country’s economical growth. More industries in a country ex...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 333, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an effective way" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...sures are taken we can build industries in an effective way. I feel this way for the reasons which ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 712, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dia comes at a relatively better price. Finally, there are some disadvantages in...
^^^
Line 4, column 565, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... blast that devastated the entire city. Because of these reasons some people oppose the...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...gh the disadvantages that come with it. When stringent measures were taken those set...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, look, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2102.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30808080808 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1648013774 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542929292929 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0930947695 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.0714285714 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1428571429 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.96428571429 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.085162464303 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240403824028 0.076458572812 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402613338192 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0527804512148 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189818979595 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 58.1214874552 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.