A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community Do you support or oppose the factory Explain your position

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A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.

Industrialization is very important in the development of a society. Up to the late 1990s, most economies in the world, including that of the United States, depended mainly on industries. However, industrialization comes at a cost. As much as industrialization has its pros, the cons of industrialization cannot be overlooked.
Although the establishment of a gigantic factory would help in providing employment for the local community, improving the commercial activities in my community, and would also contribute immensely to the economic situation of my community, I oppose the building of such a factory. The major reason for my stance is that such a factory would unavoidably lead to various types of pollution ranging from noise to air to water.
The air pollution as result of industrial processes in the factory may lead to the various types of respiratory diseases like Asthma and pneumonia. Noise pollution may reduce the quality of sleep that people living close to the factory would get in a day thereby reducing their effectiveness at work. Lack of quality sleep could also lead to constant stress and intermittent loss of attention amongst the residents thereby leading to higher frequency of accidents. Water pollution, another likely problem that might emanate from the factory, could lead to all sort of water borne illnesses.
In conclusion, due to the various arrays of health and mental challenges that could come up amongst the residents of my community as a result of the waste products that the factory would be producing once it starts operation, I believe the community is better off without such factories. Therefore, I am not in support of the construction of the factory.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, sort of, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 275.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19636363636 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20319262225 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541818181818 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.6585591315 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.083333333 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0859339927434 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.02714383614 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309173945331 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0523590206669 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397688169548 0.0645574589148 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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