Compare and contrast the advantages of city living and country living. Defend your preference.
Living in a fast-paced city (urban) or slow-paced country (rural) is a matter of choice for people. Some people might prefer to live in fast-paced city because of the modern lifestyle while some others prefer the opposite because of the peaceful condition. I personally would favor to live in an urban city because it offers several advantages. However, it is necessary for people to compare both advantages for them to decide which cities suit them better.
Urban city definitely offers more entertainment, lifestyle, shopping center and other famous social places, than rural city. Two factors drive this phenomenon. First, generally citizens of city life have more decent jobs and thus higher income. Because of this, the citizens will have bigger purchasing power to spend the money on commercial businesses. Second, big city is has a bigger population of youngsters who favor those kinds of social and lifestyle places.
Rural city, however, has the advantage of environmental-friendly living for its citizens. Because of the less populated citizens, smaller number of commercial businesses and fewer transportation vehicles, rural city produces less pollution compared to urban city. And because of the less rapid business expansion, rural city has more open natural areas, which is beneficial for human’s health, than modern city.
Education and employment system are the combined factors that urban city can provide better than rural city. They are more well-organized in big city because it is the center of the economy where more funds are available in the market for infrastructure development. It can be logically mention that since big city is usually the place where the central government takes place, it is common that urban city receive more attention from the government.
Finally, people would have different considerations and requirements to decide where they should live in. I prefer to live in urban city because I am still in the productive age group who requires that faster economic and business expansion for a better living. Some other people might choose the other one because they are in the late mover or retirement and thus need more steady and peaceful city.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hus need more steady and peaceful city.
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'well', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244845360825 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.118556701031 0.158761421928 75% => OK
Adjectives: 0.164948453608 0.0866891130778 190% => Less adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0438144329897 0.046263068375 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0360824742268 0.0685040099705 53% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123711340206 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.00773195876289 0.0351676179071 22% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.83970248513 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.020618556701 0.0309702414327 67% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0773195876289 0.0887237588012 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.020618556701 0.0209618222197 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0180412371134 0.0139019557991 130% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2208.0 2387.08602151 92% => OK
No of words: 350.0 408.028673835 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.30857142857 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.388571428571 0.338922669872 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271428571429 0.251872472559 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185714285714 0.174417080927 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.14 0.112833075102 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83970248513 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 54.4804031063 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.4444444444 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6700755991 48.84282405 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 120.699889404 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.644075263715 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 46.5873015873 45.7405998639 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.8961038961 1.45489161554 130% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323449364464 0.300154397459 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125357192593 0.103427244359 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.075982462798 0.0752933317313 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.560964908606 0.497263757937 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137216860451 0.151897553556 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125417985178 0.114077575197 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527719475782 0.0781384742642 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.314851165393 0.336927656856 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0657506146882 0.067059652881 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208384035273 0.210909579961 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341339529067 0.0618886996521 55% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.