Compare and contrast your way of life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying to future generations?
It is an undeniable fact, that there is a huge difference in way how our parents live and how we do. One can even notice how his/her parent’s character diverges from peer's one. I think that the difference is not only in behavior, but also in routine habits and more fundamental fashions. I will give some plausible explanations to bolster my opinion.
Firstly, I am a teenager, so I obviously have less obligations and chores than my parents have. When they wake up, they need to go to work. After work my mother has to cook food and father has to accomplish work assignments. What I need to do is just do my homework and be an obedient child.
Secondly, our parents do not normally have to study, because they already have the mold basis of knowledge they got from earlier years. Meanwhile, for a child, the main idea is education. Thus, parents tend to spoon-feed everything when a kid grows up to exemplify that studying is good. Then we spend many time swoting books and preparing ourselves to adult live.
Lastly, when you are a child you have a spread spectrum of choices for your future live. At that time, you decide who you would like to be, a businessman, a musician or an artist, etc. Parents usually help us with that dilemma and give some pieces of advice based on their own experience, because they have already made their choice.
What conclusion can be drawn from this? In my opinion, future generations should take the best aspects of both ways of life. Teenager's life is more unpredictable, but more ambitious, while parent's life is more about caring and helping. There will always be the difference in the ways of life, children grows and does not understand the descendants, while the latter finds new fashions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun obligations is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...y, I am a teenager, so I obviously have less obligations and chores than my parents ...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...fy that studying is good. Then we spend many time swoting books and preparing ourselves t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, as to, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72222222222 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64348382812 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614379084967 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7478350926 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0526315789 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1052631579 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229727488841 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603245375559 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707607171004 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113319330063 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100650557542 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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