Decisions can be made quickly, or they can be made after careful thought. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The decisions that people make quickly are always wrong. Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
Decisions are actions when mostly people express their attitudes, interest and ideas to the things. Some people are used to making decisions very swiftly while others need more time to spend on thinking thoroughly evaluating all possible pros and cons. To my mind, in most cases quickly made decisions are less beneficial because they lack detailed and thorough analyses.
To start with, most of the decisions decisions which are not well prepared and thoughtfully made are closely linked to haste and may lead to undesired consequences. Moreover, when being in a hurry to make a choice we are likely to face some serious obstacles which I call “everything or nothing” for instance, people are not sure while making unconscious decisions and for that reason no one is assure if anything goes for the better of the worst. The most compelling argument is that not only we are not sure about the consequences while making that kind of decision, but we also may see ourselves in a big trouble.
Secondly, working on something very hard needs putting a lot of effort in it, which in other words says that we should have more serious approach to he subject. From my point of view, thinking before making a decision diminishes the chances of mistakes. Moreover, it really boosts the confidence about the results which has been considered thought adequately.
Thirdly, if we really care about our loved ones as well as our professions or job, we need to be more attentive in any aspect of our life. It is significant, the feeling of disappointment and frustration which are mainly caused by unexpected decisions, can easily hurt the ones we love and adore. One should check hundred times more before tasting the real taste, in essence “cut once cuss twice”.
On a final note, we never know what may happen after doing something with cold-mind. That is why careful thoughts always win, where everything is considered and in the end even if something goes wrong, we can sight and say that we tried and at least we spend time on thinking about it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, as to, at least, for instance, kind of, as well as, in most cases, in other words, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88285714286 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62898909725 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591428571429 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5441657262 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.071428571 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2142857143 5.45110844103 242% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211682149555 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069646571757 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517113569063 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108547245854 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055259112215 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.