in some country, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs.
In the 21st century it is common that people still continue housing with parents even in their adulthood. We experience truly wonderful feeling while Living in the atmosphere where comfort is maintained by our loved-ones, but in some ways it has disadvantages. The common word that is frequently used in today’s society is freedom and its conception which somehow restricts the given idea.
To start with, the advantages of living with parents are countless. It takes all kinds to make a world. The majority of adults are likely to be dependent on their parents, especially when it comes to their decisions, habits and even household chores.Nowadays, Most of students lack time as well as skills to do some humble things such as doing laundries, since everything which is ready-made seems more attractive and addictive, whereas it takes a lot of effort to do them when living on their own. Notably, the standards of life have recently changed dramatically so most of adults may have true desire to live alone, but despite that fact, the cost of living does not allow them to afford such an experience and even feel mature.
On the other hand, there are benefits related to getting accustomed to living alone. For instance, living separately requires minimum budget to rent a house. In most cases adults find themselves in an awkward situation when it comes to pay accommodation rent. As a result, the feeling of embarrassment turns into a motivation to look for a job, earn money and pay all the basic expenses. Statistically, girls face more obstacles than boys in their adulthood when it comes to marriage, and one of the main reasons for this is lack of life experience.
To sum up, living separately from parents provides young people with all the opportunities to take their own decisions freely, but advantages of living alone do not outweigh its disadvantages as it is absolutely individual to decide what is the best way to lead a life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, still, well, whereas, while, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in most cases, to start with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94545454545 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83915946123 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587878787879 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.344058015 48.9658058833 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.538461538 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2307692308 5.45110844103 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271686536474 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820786163754 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656450196049 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146717301607 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570799443536 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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