Describe a custom from your country that would you like people from other countries adopt.
Undoubtedly, each country in the world is known due to specific cultures and lifestyles so that some of them can attract other people's opinion and create a curiosity in recognizing that country's custom. In this regard, in my country, Iran, there exist different nations with diverse religious and beliefs, but one thing which is important is that all people beside their nation's features respect each other and they have always proved that collaborate with together in a common community to reform current flaws. Therefore, it is very difficult job to me to select one of the cultures, but as far as I am concerned, the New Year visiting in Nowruz celebration, which is the greatest festival of Iranian is the main custom that I want other people from all around the world adopt for several reasons, among which visiting with relatives and friends, and attracting diverse passengers from different parts of the world are of conspicuous ones.
To begin with, although it may seem that social networks have achieved important opportunities to the people's life and the communication has been easy and convenient with the family members and friends, they have influenced our life in adverse direction and not only could not solve the humans' problems but also created new unnecessary demands among the individuals which caused family members escape from each other especially in the emergency moments. With this in mind, the outstanding feature of Nowruz can intensively be determined in this modern world when different people with various traditions go to their home and make an intimate sense with each other. Therefore, the New Year visiting in my country prepares the best situation for people that put aside their conflicts and strive to help together to reach their ideals and desires.
From other points of view, this celebration opens new chance for both people and society in extending the economical positions in the country. Accordingly, the New Year celebration attracts many tourists from different countries to my country. The passengers who are almost from the developed countries and have grown in a technological and facilitating conditions, are amazed from this celebration because of a common sense among the people. In addition, these tourists through visiting the monuments inject a significant wealth to the economic vessels of the society as well as they establish various kind of temporal or seasonal occupations in the country. Thus, paying attention to the tourism issue in the country can kill two birds with one stone: attracting foreign wealth to the country and recognizing the country's cultures, traditions, civilization, and customs to other humans from around the world.
All in all, in my country, Nowruz is the important celebration among the people and has diverse benefits to the people and government. People can renewal their relationships with their close relationships as well as the government can achieve to the economical and cultural goals through attracting striking tourists. Consequently, the Nowruz custom is a best cultures that other countries can adopt and enlarge in their countries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'consequently', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'in addition', 'kind of', 'as well as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254612546125 0.229887763892 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.121771217712 0.158761421928 77% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107011070111 0.0866891130778 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0442804428044 0.046263068375 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0387453874539 0.0685040099705 57% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130996309963 0.118717715034 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0332103321033 0.0351676179071 94% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80693089341 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.029520295203 0.0309702414327 95% => OK
Particles: 0.00184501845018 0.00188951952338 98% => OK
Determiners: 0.110701107011 0.0887237588012 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0147601476015 0.0209618222197 70% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0129151291513 0.0139019557991 93% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3140.0 2387.08602151 132% => OK
No of words: 501.0 408.028673835 123% => OK
Chars per words: 6.26746506986 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.40119760479 0.338922669872 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.309381237525 0.251872472559 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.229540918164 0.174417080927 132% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.149700598802 0.112833075102 133% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80693089341 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479041916168 0.524397521467 91% => OK
Word variations: 55.5611056356 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 35.7857142857 20.5533526081 174% => OK
Sentence length SD: 103.242037792 48.84282405 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 224.285714286 120.699889404 186% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 35.7857142857 20.5533526081 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 66.7238380382 45.7405998639 146% => OK
Elegance: 2.04504504505 1.45489161554 141% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150963619773 0.300154397459 50% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.16138504936 0.103427244359 156% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0342983893097 0.0752933317313 46% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.646341451138 0.497263757937 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.084285596798 0.151897553556 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940836020206 0.114077575197 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054172730937 0.0781384742642 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.525547271386 0.336927656856 156% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0164522539096 0.067059652881 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121725880348 0.210909579961 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306704156538 0.0618886996521 50% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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