Which one is more important to you for having an enjoyable vacation? friends/accommodation/foods?
Our life is rife of ups and downs and every person in today's technological world, which intensively has affected people's life, strives to fulfill his or her life in joyfulness and happiness way. In this regard, people are inclined to different ways to satisfy their desires and ideals so that one of these ways is related to their trips during the leisure times. They can opt various conditions in their trips to achieve their goals and objectives according to their personality, desires, and cultures socially acceptable in the country. While, some people prefer to guarantee their accommodation and foods during the journey, but others think otherwise. As far as I am concerned, friends can have great importance in the travelling experience for several reasons, which are elaborated hereunder.
To begin with, friends can meet our satisfaction and bring safety and economical conditions during the travel. There exist diverse problems during the trip so that the most of them have not been forecasted before. With this in mind, friends can bring calming and unstressed conditions to their fellow-travelers through creating a safe space in encountering with difficulties. In addition, going trip alone may accompany with significant expenses and only a few people afford these condition. However, being in accompany of good friends, the entire expenses share between the friends and establishes an economical situations for the travelers. On the other hand, recent statistics show that Danish people are one the happiest ones in the world thanks to the fact that their expectation is low in their pastimes and happiness moments. Accordingly, friends can play a vital role in constructing the light-hearted moments as well as have low expectations in the journey considering the all facets of the trip.
In other stand view, trip with friends bring an unmatched position to recognize our real friends and make logical decisions about them. There exists a proverb in my culture which says, "Humans only in trips can recognize them well", which indicates the significance of the trip with friends. In this regard, we can distinguish the best friends from unreal ones. Moreover, the efficiency and helpful characteristics of different people can reveal conveniently with spending less time. As a result, after a trip, one person achieves a great prospective as to their friends and can renew his or her opinion about the friends.
Last but not least, the obtained common experiences are one the important fruits of travelling with good friends so that we can broaden our horizon and open the eyes for the future developments. Living with people who have common thoughts and beliefs leads us to the brilliant future especially working conditions. For example, we can make planning and scheduling for our goals and through cooperating with experts pave the way to solving different working issues. Therefore, travelling with co-workers and friends can be known as a real situation to getting developed positions as well as the trip makes a hopeful moments us to modify our defects for the future life.
To sum up, travelling to different points of world with the company of fellow-travelers can bring us various experiences and lead to progress and real recognition of our surroundings. Therefore, using different situation in the life is one of the important conditions of achieving successful moments.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...t our satisfaction and bring safety and economical conditions during the travel. There exi...
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Line 3, column 614, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'situation'?
Suggestion: situation
...e friends and establishes an economical situations for the travelers. On the other hand, r...
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Line 7, column 616, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'moment'?
Suggestion: moment
...ons as well as the trip makes a hopeful moments us to modify our defects for the future...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'in addition', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'to begin with', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.251677852349 0.229887763892 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.129194630872 0.158761421928 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0956375838926 0.0866891130778 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0436241610738 0.046263068375 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0553691275168 0.0685040099705 81% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127516778523 0.118717715034 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0419463087248 0.0351676179071 119% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.91965410669 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0318791946309 0.0309702414327 103% => OK
Particles: 0.00167785234899 0.00188951952338 89% => OK
Determiners: 0.0889261744966 0.0887237588012 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0234899328859 0.0209618222197 112% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00838926174497 0.0139019557991 60% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3407.0 2387.08602151 143% => OK
No of words: 545.0 408.028673835 134% => OK
Chars per words: 6.25137614679 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83169070408 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.379816513761 0.338922669872 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.306422018349 0.251872472559 122% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.211009174312 0.174417080927 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.159633027523 0.112833075102 141% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91965410669 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502752293578 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 60.8280842606 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 23.6956521739 20.5533526081 115% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0301767562 48.84282405 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.130434783 120.699889404 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6956521739 20.5533526081 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.782608695652 0.644075263715 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 54.3378540088 45.7405998639 119% => OK
Elegance: 1.84558823529 1.45489161554 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150292691441 0.300154397459 50% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.107538435626 0.103427244359 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0656106317661 0.0752933317313 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.540026295997 0.497263757937 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125728134963 0.151897553556 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654806082036 0.114077575197 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366758401413 0.0781384742642 47% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.448874942792 0.336927656856 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0598008246313 0.067059652881 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111677947322 0.210909579961 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234700599704 0.0618886996521 38% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8870967742 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 20.0 8.42114695341 237% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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