People are more educated today than they were before. Agree/Disagree?
Without any shadow of doubt, education system is a key factor of leading a country to the development and advancement since within this system initiative and inventive humans can be appeared. People have accessible to diverse facilities in educational context based on their requires, experts, and the services socially provided by the government. With this in mind, there exists different attitudes toward the education level of humans in today's world and the past. While some people argue that the level of availability of people in the past was better as to today, others think otherwise. As far as I am concerned, I subscribe to latter group for several reasons, among which access to modern education centers, governmental budgets onto education programs, and changing the perspectives of today's world as to their world are some of the important reasons that are elaborated hereunder.
First and foremost, the universities as an important educational centers where the improved and advanced researches in diverse realm of science are executed, provide outstanding opportunities to the enthusiasts that continue their researches and educational goals in professional levels. On the other hand, in most of cities in any country, the large number of other educational organizations are active and propose fresh facilities to the people. In contrast, in the past years there was only a few learning centers to the people. In addition, the poor economical level of families prevented them especially their young adults that pay their attention to the education issues. Therefore, accessibility to the various investigation sites opens new world to the children to wide their horizon.
Second, most governments have accepted this fact that achieving the summit of progress in many facets needs to the great deal of budget to devote in research and educational programs. In this regards, the universities furnish their research and lab centers to the advanced equipments to students and professors uses. In addition, technology has had great contribution in today's education discussion and encouraged young people to spend their times in the research fields. Although it may seem that the technology plays as a two-edged sword and brings some virtual and temporal joyfulness, it can affect the literacy level of younger people in positive path. Therefore, the governments by knowing the fact of education on a society's success from one hand, and exploiting of modern technologies such as internet from other hand, have effective contribution in creating impetus among the new generations to act in the education environment in comparison to the past years.
Last but not least, the attitudes of today's parents to the education has intensively been changed. In the past due to the improper living conditions of people, the parents exerted their children on the farming fields or factories to supply their inevitable needs. As time passes, the world experiences blooming situations especially in economical environments. As a result, families' attitudes revolved and found new demands in the proper upbringing of their children. They were obligated that engage their younger adults in the schools and universities. In this regard, there is a renowned proverb which states, "Necessity is a mother of inventions", which is indicative of the importance of different thinking in the passage of the time.
All in all, although different people have various attitude to the issue, I believe that today's world without inventive ideas as well as smart humans cannot survive anymore and causes the destroying of humanity. The governmental supports of research and education projects, having access to the diverse universities and researchers as well as the parents' inclinations to the education play a significant role in enhancing the average level of literacy in any society.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.290830945559 0.229887763892 127% => OK
Verbs: 0.103151862464 0.158761421928 65% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107449856734 0.0866891130778 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0286532951289 0.046263068375 62% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0272206303725 0.0685040099705 40% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13323782235 0.118717715034 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0286532951289 0.0351676179071 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.13785273723 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0372492836676 0.0309702414327 120% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.107449856734 0.0887237588012 121% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00573065902579 0.0209618222197 27% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00859598853868 0.0139019557991 62% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3933.0 2387.08602151 165% => OK
No of words: 605.0 408.028673835 148% => OK
Chars per words: 6.50082644628 5.86048508987 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95951083803 4.48200974243 111% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.429752066116 0.338922669872 127% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.348760330579 0.251872472559 138% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.267768595041 0.174417080927 154% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.198347107438 0.112833075102 176% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13785273723 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 298.0 212.727598566 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492561983471 0.524397521467 94% => OK
Word variations: 61.0832799931 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 26.3043478261 20.5533526081 128% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9444088422 48.84282405 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.0 120.699889404 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3043478261 20.5533526081 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.739130434783 0.644075263715 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 61.1803808839 45.7405998639 134% => OK
Elegance: 2.84684684685 1.45489161554 196% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0441863054134 0.300154397459 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.106077381133 0.103427244359 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0495521847271 0.0752933317313 66% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.600083848227 0.497263757937 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.111048637527 0.151897553556 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.026748174855 0.114077575197 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292603055229 0.0781384742642 37% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.595347126523 0.336927656856 177% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0446295732225 0.067059652881 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0364989634364 0.210909579961 17% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166768962034 0.0618886996521 27% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.75985663082 290% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30