In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Science and technology has become a debated topic in the world. In one hand, it is necessary to the modern life where other countries are continuously developing in the field of science and technology, and on the other hand, it is essential to the undeveloped countries too to grow in the same way to be strong and well-developed for the future safety and security. With this in mind, while, some people think that the number of technological invents and cars will be higher, others think otherwise. As far as I am concerned, I subscribed to the latter group for several reasons, which are elaborated hereunder.
First and foremost, although some people may assert that developing of cars in great deals can make our life easier and convenient, it can adversely affect the humans' life from environmental stand point. On the other hand, according to Newton's third law of motion, "for every action, there is a reaction in opposite direction", which is indicative the fact that the advent of technological cars in beneficial for our future, but it has its own detrimental impacts on the environment. For example, based on recent statistics, the high portion of air pollution is related to the toxic pollutants of the fuels of cars, which has great contribution in offering fatal diseases. Therefore, growing of cars in near future, not only extends the irreplaceable detriments to the humans' life but also threatens our surrounding with diverse pollutants.
Second, the growing of and invention of high facilitates in transportation section plays a significant role in making everyone's life convenient and people spend less time on their travelling. In addition, governments allocate a great deal of their money and budgets in the public transportation and advocate these stuffs due to economical and environmental positive effects on the world. In today's modern world, the traffic in the most cities is an important problems of the people and they spend their significant times in the traffic so that they have no time on their children upbringing, moreover they suffer from mental disease because of the negative facets of the acoustic pollutions of the automobiles.
Last but not least, in today's world, young adults as important resources of development in every society are pursuing their enjoyable lives rather than being successful and prosperous for their society in general, and their personal life in particular. In addition, the young adults have lost their plans in the world and engaged themselves in trivial works thanks to exceed use of social networks and internet. In this regard, the most statistics approve the fact that the majority of suicides occur in the societies due to lack of motivation and schedule in the life among the young people. Thus, creativity and being initiative are important keys in leading a community to the development, but advent of technology has taken the people away from inventing transportation vehicles for future generations.
To sum up, in my opinion, there will be fewer cars in the future because considering vital facets of environmental issues, compels the most governments in the world that reduce the individual cars and increase the transportation vehicles instead. Moreover, youth have involved in the materialist and neglect the principals of their life so much so that they would not have an effective contribution in the innovation and progress of the community.
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...convenient, it can adversely affect the humans life from environmental stand point. On...
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Suggestion: problem
...ffic in the most cities is an important problems of the people and they spend their sign...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'third', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in general', 'in particular', 'in my opinion', 'to sum up', 'in the same way', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252059308072 0.229887763892 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.112026359143 0.158761421928 71% => OK
Adjectives: 0.120263591433 0.0866891130778 139% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0428336079077 0.046263068375 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0411861614498 0.0685040099705 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.151565074135 0.118717715034 128% => OK
Participles: 0.0362438220758 0.0351676179071 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.96932126262 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0214168039539 0.0309702414327 69% => OK
Particles: 0.00164744645799 0.00188951952338 87% => OK
Determiners: 0.103789126853 0.0887237588012 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00988467874794 0.0209618222197 47% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00823723228995 0.0139019557991 59% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3431.0 2387.08602151 144% => OK
No of words: 555.0 408.028673835 136% => OK
Chars per words: 6.18198198198 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.369369369369 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.282882882883 0.251872472559 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.214414414414 0.174417080927 123% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.163963963964 0.112833075102 145% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96932126262 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.499099099099 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 60.5609472857 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 32.6470588235 20.5533526081 159% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5584416443 48.84282405 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 201.823529412 120.699889404 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6470588235 20.5533526081 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.23529411765 0.644075263715 192% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 60.9353471118 45.7405998639 133% => OK
Elegance: 2.24369747899 1.45489161554 154% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192796262773 0.300154397459 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.13588395336 0.103427244359 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0633759998402 0.0752933317313 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.654671181092 0.497263757937 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13748371889 0.151897553556 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101511848074 0.114077575197 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521179184162 0.0781384742642 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.547227208828 0.336927656856 162% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0505681825462 0.067059652881 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145219488794 0.210909579961 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035870002294 0.0618886996521 58% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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