Describe a custom from your country that you would like people from other countries to adopt. Explain your choice.
Brazil has a lot of different customs that I would say are fantastic. But, talking specifically about one of them, The June Party is really interesting.
During June, Brazilians all around the country like to party together in a huge festival. People dress themselves with country clothes that they make at home. Additionally, habitants make delicious candies and marvelous drinks that warm them during the winter. Getting together outside home, everyone dances a specific kind of music around a fire made by wood.
As Brazil is a giant nation, we can see the same festival occuring in different regions. If we look at the South, we can observe big barbecues and other traditional foods that we cannot find in Rio, as an example.
Going to the North we can absolutely find the biggest June Party. Some cities stop during a entire week just to celebrate. Due to their own tradition, they have some special foods make with corn and other different drinks. And in the North people love to pop up fireworks to make the festival happier.
As mentioned before, there is one common situation that occurs everywhere. As a normal characteristic about the June Party, the music that we listen is special. Around the fire, couples dance and the movements are fantastic. But, just after some weeks training dancers can get good enough.
To conclude, I would say that Brazil has a bunch of beautiful and traditional customs. Because its size, large as a continent, every region has its own parties. However, June Party is something that we can see in all areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 264.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88636363636 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59511443224 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587121212121 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.8180749621 48.9658058833 34% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.8947368421 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8947368421 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26315789474 5.45110844103 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0742675962135 0.236089414692 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0232423302744 0.076458572812 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377426254068 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0366085997729 0.150856017488 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309106462265 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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