Describe an object that is very special in your life Explain why this object is important to you Include details and examples in your explanation

Everyone has got precious things in their life that might be attached emotionally or psychologically. To elaborate, I have so many essential things but among them, diamond ring that my husband gave to me in our fifth anniversary is really everything to me. I am fortunate to say that It is one of the most expensive thing I have ever got from anyone in my life as gift. I will illustrate this incident and its value in the subsequent paragraph.

To begin with, the ring I have got from my life partner is the most expensive than the rings I have before. Virtually, it costs around ten thousand USD in the jewelry market because of its one carat big diamond stone in the mid surrounded by fifteen small diamonds. I have interesting story to share about it which I am going to explain to you. In our fifth anniversary day, my husband went to the office without wishing me and came back without any bunch of flower. Moreover, he did not talk anything about our anniversary as if he forgot it. As a result, I got really furious and opened the door to go outside than the bunch of flower and a box was there front of my door with a letter. When I opened it, huge surprise was making me shock. I am really lucky to say that he took me to the restaurant at night where everyone from my family, office and colleague were waiting to celebrate our anniversary.

This ring is noticeable and catch the eyes of people in the ceremony I attend so I do not have to were other heavy jewelry. Everyone who have seen this ornament has praised it saying it helps me to make my personality impressive towards others. To be honest, it makes me feel comfortable to join the party with high personality figure who are from different background and professions, and never lower me as an inferior in the mass.
It is my immense pleasure to say that I always feel psychologically safe for the financial burden. So I never leave my ring to my parents' home because If anything comes to me and I have to manage money, I have always this ring to manage money by selling it to overcome from the situation. In our anniversary day, my husband told that he gave it not because he wanted most expensive thing to gift but to save some money in precious thing because of which I can sell when I needed after tired of wearing it.

To sum up, diamond ring that I have is the most significant thing that rare people are lucky to have. Because of the special memories and its value, it is so special to me.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, really, so, as a result, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 82.0 43.0788530466 190% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38260869565 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57367434263 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.37729821 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0443357548707 0.236089414692 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.018761183186 0.076458572812 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0233690399509 0.0737576698707 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0323604291397 0.150856017488 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131629721631 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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