Do agree or disagree with the following statement?
The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.
There is no doubt that nowadays, famous entertainers and athletes play the crucial in people’s lives. No one can deny the influence of famous people on our private lives. A controversial question which is often raised in this issue what kind of people in the society more influence on them? Some people may hold this viewpoint they are more important for younger people. However, some other may take an opposite view and believe that popular people most important to older people. From my perspective, the first belief is true. The reasons I believe so are manifold, which will be discussed widely hereunder.
One of the reasons coming to mind at the first nowadays celebrities can give courage and impetus the youth and younger people to be effort and endeavor to any their tasks, such as in the works, in the sports, and every task. An empirical study in the Asia shows that the majority of the youth are inspired celebrities to do their duty with a high attempt. Thus, they not only can be prosperous in the future, but can be construction one society with inducement as well.
Another privilege, when someone is seeing or using media, he or she must see their work which prevalent throughout the world. As a result, presumably, everyone makes their actions and acts, which can be useful in his or her life. For instance, when I was young, I was imitating their habits and right acts in my life; by doing so, everyone admired me for this action because of my act very moral and favorite in the between people. On the other hand, an old people adequately have not induced for a novel or new acts to make in their life because they think very thick for an innovation. Also hardly they change their idea in the specific title, in my country, in the historic tell says” drop does not penetrate in the stone.”
The last but not the least, the younger people like pioneer or champion in their work. For example, one athlete in the football makes methods of a famous athlete in their sports to be flourishing, because their plans are successful. Moreover, their approach can turn a blind eye of the youth to prosperous which comes subsequent in every predicament.
To wrap it up, it is my profound belief that celebrities can become more important for younger people because their receptivity to very high to change their methods of life. All in all, the most of younger people confront to successfulness celebrities whether they like to use their act or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, kind of, no doubt, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2046.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74709976798 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58953088205 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512761020882 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5622946667 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.684210526 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6842105263 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73684210526 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177429843089 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624055348581 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058566269097 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10754933134 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632930030299 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.