Do yo agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
I think, nowadays, the rules that societies expect youngsters to follow and obey are not too strict. The reasons to support my viewpoint are elaborated on in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, nowadays, young people are knowledgeable enough to distinguish among rules, so they do what they like. To be more specific, in the modern ear where we live in, people are aware of various issues, and they know how to behave in society in order to become a successful one. As a result, they follow a specific rules or way which are guarantee their success. It is no secret to anyone that if individuals do not expect positive effects of obeying certain rules, they will not interested in following them. Therefore, in most of the case, people in most of the modern countries are free to do what they want. For instance, the young people are free to choose between staying with their parents or not.
Moreover, the governments contemplate their reputation and they do not assign strict rules. In this regard, the governments do not make risks to assign those rules since they mainly affect their reputation in every society. For instance, smoking and drinking an alcoholic drink have detrimental impacts on humans' both mental and physical health. In this case, if governments restrict to using the mentioned products, it may lead to conflict between juveniles and administers. Having considered the mentioned consequences, the governments do not assign such strict rules for individuals. It is evident that some people who are concern about their health do not utilize those products.
In conclusion, contemplating all the reasons and examples, I do believe that youth are free to choose what they want rather than following strict rules in society. This is because the governments know the young people are aware about various things and they are consider they own reputation. Therefore, they do no assign strict rules.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06289308176 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72641328081 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518867924528 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.573978578 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7058823529 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287824659656 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106015510818 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909805168762 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213379584993 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963674333757 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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