Do yo agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
I agree with the statement that there are too many strict rules in our society to anticipate young people to follow them. I believe this way for several reasons.
To begin with, I consider that too many rules would constrain the youngsters to do something that they dislike. For example, if you have to obey the rules of the anticipation of the society, you may abandon your own interests and become a doctor or a lawyer who seem to have more social reputation in the eyes of the public no matter what you are genius in art, science or some other fields.
Second, due to the overload of stringent rules, you might be limited to be imaginative or creative. If all the society wants everyone to be kind and optimistic, some sort of good personalities that the public considers, then everyone in the society would be alike and have no differences.
Third, when you confront dozens of rules, you might feel under pressure. Take me for example. As I was a child, I was taught to study hard and earnestly to get scores which is as higher as possible. As a result, in that period, I did not feel happy to learn knowledge from the cold textbooks because of lots of expectations and stress on me.
Tons of the rules in the society today strictly force young people to be constrained or limited or under pressure, which is not the correctest approach for adolescents to follow. In my opinion, the best way for young people to grow up is to give them freedom to do things they are interested in and to actively motivate them to express their feelings and perspectives. Finally, the basic rule in the society is enough for them; therefore, just leave them much more liberty to be themselves and courageous to confront the adversity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...nestly to get scores which is as higher as possible. As a result, in that period, ...
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Line 9, column 533, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d courageous to confront the adversity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, third, for example, sort of, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61363636364 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62683607249 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558441558442 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9827320325 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.307692308 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260731929914 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911724233817 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145095295322 0.0737576698707 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151536008979 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142073685206 0.0645574589148 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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