Do you agree with the following statement? Good teachers are more important to a child's development than good parents. Use specific details to support your argument.
Good teachers really play a vital role in children life, they don't only teach subjects but also some important lessons of life. some people think that good teacher are important to the child's development more that good parent, but I on other hand believe that its good to have good teachers but it is mandatory to have good parents for child's development.
To begin with, teachers come to the life of children around the age of 5, but parents always be with the children from the day one. Obviously, children learn more from the parents then any teachers. Moreover they spend some hours of the day with teachers but, rest of the time they are with parents. Children learn more from the parents as for them they are basic building block, that is what is the world for them. Things or action done by the parents mostly effect the children and children consider those actions are correct and do not raise concern about it. So, its important for parents to be good.
Secondly, good parents will take care of there children no matter what. Good parent make sure the children are being taught by good teacher and if they notice teacher are good enough, they can make necessary arrangements in order to fix it. Also there are options for home schooling where students, where parents take care of students educations and children actually do much well and become really good human being, For instance Thomos Edision, in his early age of study he was removed from very class and teacher did not see the talent he had or did not thing of him as a special student, but it was his mother who encouraged him to study more and achieve his dreams
Finally, teacher change with every class , very subject and very year, but parents stay in children life for life time. They do not only teach and care for them but also support them in there weak moments. A child can adjust with a bad teacher for a class or a year but adjust with bad parents can destroy there life. In addition to that there will be multiple students in class, so its difficult for students to concentrate on each of them, whereas good parents can actually take care of this job without hesitation.
In conclusion, even though having a good teacher is advantage in child's development but, having a good parents is mandatory for child's development. I consider myself lucky to have both good parents and good teachers in my life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, as for, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67924528302 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25793364824 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459905660377 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.43937803 48.9658058833 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 124.0 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 5.45110844103 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244420542848 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106891438699 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768972353326 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178432419565 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745153226445 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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