Do you agree with the following statement:
"A person should never make an important decision alone."
Some people prefer to make their important decisions by themselves without having to talk with their closest ones. In my opinion, I feel that we should never make crucial decisions on our own because of two reasons.
The first reason why we should consult with someone when we're about to make an important decision is because the person may have been in the situation that we are facing. Discussing the issue with someone who made a similar decision before can help us figure out the options more easily. For example, when I graduated from high-school, I couldn't decide what university to pursue, choosing from studying to be a medical doctor or be a chemical engineer like my father. I knew that to become a medical doctor is very demanding and it requires many years of studying before I get to practice in the real world. I did not consider that my parents would spend so much time thinking about this dilemma, but I had a talk with my father and he opened up my eyes, because as a young man he always wanted to be a doctor, to help people, and this way I was able to consider my options.
The second reason why we should not make decisions on our own is because we tend to make impulsive and reckless moves. Sure, it might take a while to talk to someone when we are faced with making a decision, so we more likely inclined to rush ahead. I remember when I bought my first smartphone and I paid a lot of money for it, and it seemed a good time for that purchase, but when I talked with my best friend about what I purchased, he told me that smartphones are not always a good investment, because every year they launch a new product and it's only small changes. If I talked about this issue beforehand, I would not made the decision of buying the smartphone.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that it's not always a good idea to make decisions on our own and instead try to talk to someone to see their opinion. There is always someone in our lives that probably had to take the same decision as we are about to take, so it's best if you can talk it out.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: couldn't
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Message: Did you mean 'take awhile'?
Suggestion: take awhile
...sive and reckless moves. Sure, it might take a while to talk to someone when we are faced wi...
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...bout this issue beforehand, I would not made the decision of buying the smartphone. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34455958549 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40200151223 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5466562047 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6923076923 20.6045352989 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163357917291 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716843145394 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597804181959 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118647908467 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043477056778 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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