Do you agree or disagree: the advertising is the only main cause of unhealthy eating habits?
Now a day, with our society developing, a lot of advertisement around us, and some of them will lead us the unhealthy eating habits, but I think there are also have other things will lead us unhealthy eating habits, so I disagree with this opinion.
Admittedly, advertising will cause unhealthy eating habits. As we all know, in some fast food restraints’ advertising may have the sense like some people eat very quickly with some fatty and fried food. This will give those busy persons imply that If you were busy, you would choose some fast food to save time. This implies will lead people some unhealthy eating habits.
However, some unhealthy eating habits may cause by go on diet. Many young girls are focused on other’s evaluation, and some of them may choose to be moderate in eating to be more slender. In some ways eating less can help them keep slim, but this also can cause malnutrition. It’s very harmful to our bodies.
Besides, big pressures also result to unhealthy eating habits. When you have a big pressure, you may have no time to eat, and after that may will choose to eat more. Every white-collar may have the experience that you have lot of work to do so you need to work overtime. At this time, how do you usually treat with your dinner? Don’t eat until finish the work to enjoy a big meal? Not eat on time and sometimes eat too much, may lead to stomachache.
In conclusion, the Advertising may one cause of unhealthy eating habits, but still have others will cause unhealthy eating habits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, still, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 270.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70740740741 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53103913879 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511111111111 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4253393023 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4375 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283949904831 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121674641587 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832975805602 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185920687571 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555163423258 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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