Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to ask decisions for them; today young people are batter able to make decisions about their own lives.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
With the development of society, our living habits have covert a lot. people currently have lots of ways to help them make decisions. some people like depending on their parents to ask decision for them,some are more likely to make decisions about their own lives.As for me, I support the second statement and there are reasons.
first, the experience from parents is not very useful now. In the past, people made decision rely on experience from the elderly,and their parents became the most convenient sources to get information. But with the technical development, our life changed every day, so the old experience updated quickly and soon becomes useless, so young people need to find some more useful information to help them make decisions.
second, we have lots of more convenient sources to get information. In the past, if you want your parents helping you to make some decision, you need to tell them lots of background information and cost a lot of time to tell the whole story, however, your parents may even not find out what your problems are, and you need to follow their logic step by step to make sure you really understand what their really said, and these processes will easily make you feel exhausted.But if you search problems on the internet, you can find lots of people encounter the same problem, and you can get lots of experiences in a very short time. It is more quickly and easier to help you find the conclusion.
Admittedly, lots of young people leave their hometown to work or study so that their parents can't give them suggestion immediately. Nowadays, with the traffic development, people like to travel a very long distance to work and study, and leave their parents very far.so when they encounter some problems and need to make decisions, they can't find their parents at the first time, the society forces their mind becoming more and more independent,so they are more willing to make decision by themselves.
In a word, with our lives quickly development, young people can find suggestions on the internet conveniently, so they don't need to depend on their parents to help them make decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, really, second, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61476771864 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465564738292 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.566780208 48.9658058833 297% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.5 100.406767564 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.25 20.6045352989 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340604021417 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137976503707 0.076458572812 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108825424413 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224669242787 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069836680037 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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