Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In current society different people have different lifestyle, this rule also suitable for those people in their work day, personally, I really think suitable is the most critical thing for people in their daily work, so I think this choice based on their personal interests.
First, some people like to challenge themselves when they have many different types of task to do they will feel exciting. As myself for example, I like challenge myself and try everything new, I still remember last summer I became a inter in Pin’an, one of the biggest insure company in our country, and my job is quiet easy, make sure every month industry information is correct and do a simple analyze about this industry, I feel so tired everyday, because it’s quiet boring for me. One day my mentor ask me whether I’m willing to join his team and do something special, I recognized immediately, from that day, I have heavier and heavier workload, and overwork every day. But I get extremely satisfied from this project and really learn a lot from it. so I think as for me I really need various kinds of task to try, interesting is the most important thing in my life. And challenge can burn my blood make me feel everyday life is useful, and I’m a useful person for the whole society, so I really think, I need lots of different thing to try, and from these different tasks I can use them in my future career, I hope it must useful in one day.
However, some people like doing some similar task all day long.Because they think they can feel relaxed from these task. As my best friend joy for example, she works in a financial office, and as a clerk in the shop, everyday she only needs to check her e-mail and translated them into Chinese, and all the information in the e-mails are quiet similar, so it is very easier for her to finish everyday work, and she can leave her office on time,after that, she likes reading books in the library, and enjoying the low-speed life. She has very little pressure from her work, because she wants to have much more personal life, and she really thinks learn something new in the office is useless, she just wants to do some basic job and have a relaxed life. She thinks because the rapid development of economy force people have heavier workload, which either deprive people of the time to do exercises and to have a rest or result in overwhelming pressure that can induce severious mental disorders, she thinks this is unworthy for her, so she always like to do what she really like.
My opinion is thus clear: people need to choose the most suitable way in their work style.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... to challenge themselves when they have many different types of task to do they will feel exci...
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Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
..., I still remember last summer I became a inter in Pin'an, one of the bigges...
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Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
..., I still remember last summer I became a inter in Pin'an, one of the biggest insu...
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Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: THE_PUNCT[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'an'?
...ast summer I became a inter in Pin'an, one of the biggest insure company in ou...
^^^
Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ze about this industry, I feel so tired everyday, because it's quiet boring for me....
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Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Because
...ke doing some similar task all day long.Because they think they can feel relaxed from t...
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Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ke doing some similar task all day long.Because they think they can feel relaxed from t...
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Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , after
...rk, and she can leave her office on time,after that, she likes reading books in the li...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, so, still, thus, as for, for example, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2155.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6047008547 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41504419302 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485042735043 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 688.5 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 11.0 1.86738351254 589% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.1344086022 194% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.308305062 48.9658058833 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.583333333 100.406767564 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.0 20.6045352989 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191937499377 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941846105753 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107465605756 0.0737576698707 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910888587543 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737873838051 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 11.7677419355 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 58.1214874552 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.1575268817 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.0537634409 175% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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