Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams.
Will, with the development in persons minds. Persons have lot of choice for their interest, however, the argue between the government should spend more money on arts or sports never stop. Personally, I think governments should keep the balance in twosides.
First, The art is the foundamental for peoples physical build. Now a day, with the technology development, peoples pressure also grow up, so during the weekends, they may choose to join in a theater or a movie or an art salon to have fun. But if the government not focus on the art develpment, the demand of the art can't be satisfied, this will increasing people's never, and lead to some social problems. From other side, we also need to cooperate some new style artistics. Art is a significant part of our culture, the panting, the poem are the reaction of culture, If we can't have lots of people to learn, to create, our culture development will slow down.
Second, the Olympic teams can show out the national image to the whole world. There is no doubt that athletics is very important. Every four years Olympic game need every country to try their best for the gold. And this is a work need the whole country to cooperate, and every small team bulids up the successful. If a team can't afford a coach, not have best equipment to test them. They may even not have the right deraction, all prepare will be meaningless. No pain, no gain. If a country wants to get a good grade at the Olympic game, they need give those athletics best basic support.
Admittedly, keep the balance can help country more strong. The whole country should developing in both arts and sports, they like the two arms of a healthy man, If one arm is shorter, he will not keep the balance, and easy to hurt himself.
In a word, If a country want have a healthy develop, they need take care both arts and the sports athletics.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... the Olympic game, they need give those athletics best basic support. Admittedly, keep the ba...
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Suggestion: sports'; sport's
..., they need take care both arts and the sports athletics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, i think, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58083832335 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47056608858 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556886227545 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.788820753 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5263157895 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5789473684 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42105263158 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169798829503 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04737854861 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528184109298 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894398183284 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547858917565 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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