Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to maintain friendship with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friend s easily. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
communication with others including family, friends, and colleagues to name but a few is an inevitable and necessary fact. In other words, people needs share their emotions and feeling with others for some reasons. In this regard, there is a long-standing discussion among people about what kind of friendship is more beneficial. some people believe that making new friends all the time is better than forming a few but permanent friendship. others, however, advocate the idea that people who are in relation with small number of people over a long period of time are more happy and satisfied than other categories. I personally, concur with the latter. In the following paragraphs, I will delve in to the most important reasons.
it is crystal clear that when individuals know each other for a long time, they feel convenient in their relationships and enjoy their companionship. they are familiar with their friend’s characteristics and they can satisfied their friend's expectations. For example, my best friend whose name is Maral is aware of my beliefs, so she never bother me with religious matters. we never talk about this concept because we know that it is personal and none of us do not like annoy each other with upsetting matters. I know she is not on time at all, so when she delay for our appointment, I do not get angry because I know she has a hectic life and she is trying to solve this disorder.
Secondly, people who have old friendship can express their feeling and get sympathy from them. they trust their friends completely and say them their secrets as opposed to when you know somebody for a short time and you do not no his/her purpose. making new friends and being intimate a lot with them may cause some disastrous mistakes. they are maybe not loyal and behave to the detriment of your situation and success. For example, I became familiar with a girl last year. she was very kind and generous in appearance. having communicated with her after one month, I came to understand that she wanted to damage my job position because she was very jealous. Fortunately, I never tell her my secrets.
To sum up, I really believe that old friends can make life beautiful. this is because they understand us and they are truthful. Hence, should people preserve their valuable and old fellowships, they will be more joyful in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, for example, kind of, you know, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1966.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85432098765 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71727918286 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525925925926 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4576655721 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4782608696 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6086956522 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08695652174 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263114827161 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076489770128 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663736618333 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160715591905 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100634737144 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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