Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All school teachers should be required to take courses every five years to update their knowledge.
Throughout history human being has perpetually been concerned about how to improve the education level. Such a constant effort has become even more noticeable in the modern era were teachers` knowledge and education facilities have an inevitable impact on people`s success. In this regard, there has been a longstanding controversy among academicians as to whether all school teachers should be required to take courses every five years to update their knowledge. I personally agree with the above mentioned statement and believe that these programs can improve teachers` performance.
The most prominent role to be mentioned is that teachers should take a part in these classes to learn about new technologies and science. Nowadays, human knowledge about the world changes every day. Besides new technology dominate people`s life and alter it every second. So, teachers should keep their self along with this constant change and update their knowledge consequently. Take a person experience as an example. I had a teacher in the university how did not know anything about computer or using some software for his presentation. Although he was one of the most well-known professor of my country, few student take a course with him, because they thought his class was boring.
The other important reason crossing my mind now is that if teachers and university professors do not required to take these courses, they may forget the fundamental knowledge of their field. To illustrate, I would like to mention some available statistic about this point. The result of the survey conducted recently in my country clearly depicts that more than 59 percent of adult people forget the lesson they learn after 3 years after the time which they are graduated from their universities. These means that teachers should go over what they learned before to be ready for all of their students questions and they should now that if the cannot answer their students questions they cannot earn their respect and eventually they are not able to control their class.
The last but not the least reason by which claim is justified is that these classes provide an opportunity for teachers to get familiar with the new methods of teaching. For instant, the can learn the advantageous and disadvantageous of the lecture base classes and effectively utilize this method to improve their teaching performance. Moreover, they can use psychological method to improve the student’s concentration. for example, they can divided the class time in to different part based on their student`s age and between each time they can allow students to have some rest. These method have an enormous effect on the class efficiency.
Form what has been discussed above, we may safely reach the conclusion that teachers should take courses every five years because it helps them to update their knowledge and learn new method of teaching. I also believe that time these kind of classes help teachers to remember what they learned before. All in all, it is anticipated that in future teachers and university professors will pay more heed to this kind of programs.
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Suggestion: whether
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Suggestion: divide
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Message: Did you mean 'this method' or 'These methods'?
Suggestion: This method; These methods
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Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'consequently', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243386243386 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.15873015873 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0634920634921 0.0866891130778 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0405643738977 0.046263068375 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0705467372134 0.0685040099705 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118165784832 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.031746031746 0.0351676179071 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82489574322 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0335097001764 0.0309702414327 108% => OK
Particles: 0.00176366843034 0.00188951952338 93% => OK
Determiners: 0.102292768959 0.0887237588012 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0299823633157 0.0209618222197 143% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0123456790123 0.0139019557991 89% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3150.0 2387.08602151 132% => OK
No of words: 508.0 408.028673835 125% => OK
Chars per words: 6.20078740157 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.366141732283 0.338922669872 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.285433070866 0.251872472559 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.206692913386 0.174417080927 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.137795275591 0.112833075102 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82489574322 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501968503937 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 59.3838910484 59.2087087015 100% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0869565217 20.5533526081 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8934599449 48.84282405 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.956521739 120.699889404 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0869565217 20.5533526081 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.565217391304 0.644075263715 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 50.6302636084 45.7405998639 111% => OK
Elegance: 1.45751633987 1.45489161554 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388289483513 0.300154397459 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0986700869958 0.103427244359 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0748573122334 0.0752933317313 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.476945258611 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147258516697 0.151897553556 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131162327279 0.114077575197 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100197328762 0.0781384742642 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.346621266106 0.336927656856 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0616701016964 0.067059652881 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260137436719 0.210909579961 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065117485747 0.0618886996521 105% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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