Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All universities students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
One of significant decision every student should make during his/her academic education is which courses help him/her making improvement. History courses is one of those courses which some people believe that it is crucial for every educated person to pass these courses while others agree with that students should take courses which relevant to their field of study. I, myself agree with the later idea. In the following paragraphs I will discuss my reasons.
To begin with, students go to universities to follow their dreams and should take courses which they like. Students choose their future job when they enter the university and they try to make path to reach their goal. This path is full of courses that help them to going through the way and maybe history courses is not one of them. For instance, when I went to university, it is obligatory to take history courses. My field of study was Industrial Engineering and that course took me so much time that I can put in other programs which help me improve myself. So, I think taking history courses should not be mandatory in universities.
Moreover, maybe history courses are irrelevant to the major of the students and they have not competent in those courses and get bad grades. Students try their best on the course they like, cause they are passion it. However, they have not eager to pass irrelevant courses. As a result, they get bad grades. As matter of fact, one of my friends was studying computer science and liked to take one of my courses which is irrelevant to his major. After a while, he hated that course and at the end of the semester he got a C.
In conclusion, I disagree with the idea of taking history courses in universities that is irrelevant to the field of study and maybe affect their average by getting a terrible grade; hence, I think it is better for students to take courses they like in universities and use it in future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...es they like in universities and use it in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, of course, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72997032641 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46926354551 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483679525223 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5827705821 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7647058824 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284974665279 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100864485246 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803309680084 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208023009747 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630102482033 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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