Do you agree or disagree with the following statement All university students should be required to take at least one class that teaches the culture of a country other than their own Use specific reasons and example to support your opinion

Students in college can take a variety of courses, these courses provide professional training or culture introduction. Students acquire distinct types of knowledge in different classes. I firmly believe that students need to take at least one class about culture in college, because such courses
assists students to learn the history and culture of a country deeply, and respect foreigners’ behaviors. My reasons are as follow.

To begin with, taking courses about the culture of a country assists students to know the history of the nation, and become more proud of the country. By learning the culture of the country, the students would have deeper link to the environment. For example, I took a course that introduce the culture and history about Hsinchu when I was a college student. The professor mentioned tourists could visit a gate built Quin dynasty, and other historical buildings that were constructed in Japanese period. After taking the course, I realized that the culture in Hsinchu was more profound than I had imagined. In the end, whenever my friends plan to have trip, I always introduce the culture and history in Hsinchu and encourage them to visit the historical sites.

Secondly, students are able to respect different people through taking culture of a country because they learn the distinction between different places and how people from other places behave distinctly. For example, I took a class that introduced Japan culture in college. The professor taught the history of Japan, the society in Japan, and other related topics about Japanese culture. Through learning the courses, I know the reason why Japanese people are independent to others, because they don’t want to unnecessarily offend other people. If I hadn’t taken the class, I would still have misunderstandings about Japan.

To sum up, I’m a firm believer that students must take at least one course about culture in university. Because the courses assists students to discover the history and culture that they didn’t know before, and allows students to learn different cultures and respect other people.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, still, at least, for example, of course, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27218934911 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68790849379 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470414201183 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3630011482 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.823529412 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209126681903 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796526155251 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051481340068 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142639660798 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283745326615 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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