University courses can be roughly classified into two categories; liberal and science. Both of them are considered as the cornerstone of social development. Lately, an interesting discussion has arisen about whether university students should be required to take basic science courses even if they are not in the career goal. From my perspective, basic science courses are not necessary for every university student and I will elaborate in the following paragraphs.
Admittedly, requiring all students to study basic science courses might increase knowledge or have a positive influence on their future careers. Knowledge is power, having an extra common sense of different fields is always a benefit. However, better master one than engage with ten, having extra courses is possible will deprive the student of time and energy that are supposed to belong to their majors and social life.
Moreover, students who attempted university usually have decided their major and already planned career goals for themselves. Ideally, the university is a supreme hall for professional research, students specialize in diverse domains able to share knowledge freely. Forcing students to take basic science courses might cause unnecessary pressure on individuals who are not interested in science fields. For instance, students majoring in liberal arts might want to spend time focusing on their projects. Creating an art piece needs time and energy, therefore, science courses are not what they need to pay attention to.
In addition, having an additional science course might cause problems for students who need to work. People seem to fail take into account that not everyone have fully finacial suppots from parents, many of them even rely on student loan to pay their fees and health insurnce. According to an recent survey shows that nearly half of the students have a part time job, and the salary still not enough to afford diffrent sorts of expense. Thus, studnts are unlikely to spend time on science courses.
From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw a conclusion that requiring university students to take basic science courses is unnecessary. Not only it would cause distraction, but also make financial issues.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34090909091 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64594653345 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571022727273 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4895870316 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.444444444 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350372407386 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111523742985 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111431070701 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208506143595 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107665116908 0.0645574589148 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
University courses can be roughly classi...
^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elaborate in the following paragraphs. Admittedly, requiring all students to st...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...long to their majors and social life. Moreover, students who attempted univers...
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Line 4, column 290, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... fees and health insurnce. According to an recent survey shows that nearly half of...
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Line 4, column 353, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...that nearly half of the students have a part time job, and the salary still not enough to...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34090909091 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64594653345 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571022727273 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4895870316 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.444444444 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350372407386 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111523742985 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111431070701 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208506143595 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107665116908 0.0645574589148 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.