Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people
It is axiomatic that we live in a hectic world where human being's life becomes more complicated than a few decades ago. These days trust and trustworthiness is one of the major factors of friendship among individuals. While many people believe that always being straightforward in relationships is inevitable, on the other hand, a majority of individuals hold the opinion that it is not necessary to telling the truth in some cases to friends. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the former idea and the reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
To begin with, it is crystal clear that due to hustle and bustle lifestyle in contemporary times, people incline to have intimate friends. Accordingly, individuals can take advantage of their fellow to solve their problems in their life. So as to have a long relationship with people trustworthy is a key factor. Consequently, intimate friends can survive their fellow in hardships. My own experience brings this notion of home. When I was a high school student, I had an accident which my car damaged badly also I did mot have adequate money to repair my vehicle. However, my close friend who she was my girlfriend had informed about my accident so she lent me money to fix my car since I last year when we broke up, our relationship had been over with telling truth to each other. Ultimately, if we were not straightforward together, she would never help me.
Moreover, it goes without saying people need to have close friends in their life in order to have a long-lasting relationship. Nowadays many people prefer to have a fellow whom they trust each other. This kind of friendship not only helps people to have a relationship together for a long time but also it is beneficial for their families. To put it into a vivid picture, one of my intimate friend work for a super company which produces electronic devices. My sister had been studied electrical engineering and she was looking for a job but she could not invite me to the interview for being employed. One day, when my friend and his family came to our house for dinner, he hears that my sister wanted to apply for a job, so he decided to introduce my sister to her boss in order to become a technical master in their company. Finally, he told me I do this job because you and your family are always telling the truth.
In conclusion, having these aforementioned reasons and points into account, I do believe that telling the truth in relationship is important. Because friends can help each other in hard situations and also having a straightforward friendship can be useful in not only our life but also it can affect on our family.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
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Suggestion: days'; day's
...mplicated than a few decades ago. These days trust and trustworthiness is one of the...
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Line 1, column 401, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'tell'?
Suggestion: tell
...the opinion that it is not necessary to telling the truth in some cases to friends. As ...
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Message: “So as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to solve their problems in their life. So as to have a long relationship with people...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: To
... to solve their problems in their life. So as to have a long relationship with people tr...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ul in not only our life but also it can affect on our family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, finally, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, as to, in conclusion, kind of, in some cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2213.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72863247863 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87670250562 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 705.6 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.555758925 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.380952381 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13595651489 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480916303756 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614722842908 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919061354393 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182829805288 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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