Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree with the proposed statement. A world without any truth in there, I can not imagine it. Some people create their relationships based on false things and lying. In my perspective telling the truth always is the best work because if we do not express the truth, it will show yourself soon enough and it is likely to ruin our relationships completely. Telling the truth in the relationships will create loyalty and trust each other.
For a very simple example, when I was at high school I never lied to my teachers and managers. When I had not written my assignments or homework, I told my teacher the real reason so she understood me and did not punish me. The managers in school were giving me responsibilities at important works because they could be confident about the result of my job.
For another example, when I was at university I got a boyfriend, we had the same research field in university. In the first time of our relationship, I just told him the truth about myself, my family, my friends, and about anything. It became so obvious to him that he can trust me. So, when some jealous persons at the university tried to lie to him about me he did not react because he knew that I am not lying to him, and I do not want to deceive him.
To sum up, I never got harm in my relationship so, I think anytime that I tell the truth, things will go right.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I tell the truth, things will go right.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 1977.66487455 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 255.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37254901961 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67985780063 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556862745098 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 618.680645161 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8163191344 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7692307692 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141915869739 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628060466643 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602157869689 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955534987638 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882927095021 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 86.8835125448 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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