Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
In order to maintain a good, healthy relationship with another person, there are many considerations. Some are more important than others. Personally, I think that always telling the truth is the most important aspect in any relationship between people. This is because lies hurt people's feelings, no matter how innocent the lie may seem. Telling the truth is better for everyone involved, for, if you cannot trust someone it is difficult to get close to them emotionally.
First, telling the truth is very important because lies hurt people's feelings, no matter how innocent the lie might seem to be. On the other hand, many people believe that telling lies is not bad because everyone tells a lie at least once in their life. For instance, if you lie to your best friend and say that you didn't eat his cookie, it does not seem very hurtful. However, if your friend finds out you lied to him, it can make him sad that you didn't tell him the truth. More serious lies only hurt others more and cause tension in the relationship.
In addition, telling someone the truth is better for everyone involved. Conversely, some people think that, sometimes, lies can help people. For example, if you tell your parents that you don't know who ate their pie when actually you saw your brother eating it, you may think you are helping your brother by keeping him out of trouble and helping your parents by making sure they are not angry about their pie. But if your parents found out you knew that your brother ate their pie, your parents would be even angrier and they would likely punish both you and your brother. Again, more serious lies can be even more damaging to one or more of the parties involved. As helpful as you may think you are being, any lie can be harmful.
Lastly, if you do not trust someone it is difficult to get close to them emotionally. A lot of people think that if you know that someone lies all the time, you can simply overlook it. But when you're not sure if what someone says is true, you start to doubt if anything they say is true. When you can't trust a person to tell you what they really think, it is easy to withdraw emotionally from them so you don't get hurt. When one person closes himself off emotionally, the relationship can be difficult to sustain and even more difficult to develop further.
Ultimately, telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. For, it is important to keep in mind how a lie - no matter how small - will make a person feel, if the lie will make things better or worse for everyone involved, and if the lie will make it more difficult for the people to be emotionally close. In my experience, telling a lie has always hurt one party's feelings, made a situation worse, or made it difficult to connect emotionally. Thus, it is critical to always tell the truth in a relationship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, conversely, first, however, if, lastly, look, may, really, so, thus, at least, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2366.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 515.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59417475728 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44640098746 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.417475728155 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 720.9 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.882389881 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.64 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266284767496 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105164955408 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106891539223 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183696974148 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706382382157 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.31 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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