Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As getting to a modern lifestyle, conventional relationships experience an immense change. One of the most crucial aspects of life in being honest which was sometimes a place of debate. There are a number of people who agree with the view that one should always tell the whole truth, however, others think that sometimes it needs to tell lies. In my own opinion, I do believe that the first theory is more rational because of two major reasons which are explained in the following paragraphs.
First of all, being honest will definitely bring us not only happiness but also a perfect quality of life. In other words, when people try to tell always the right things about the events, they feel that other individuals treat them in the same way. Therefore, they feel a profound happiness through their life, as a result, their life quality will promote obviously and become prosperous. For example, my brother chiefly tries to tell lies, actually white lies as he believes. I can distinguish that he is always skeptical about others even me and other family members because he premises that other people are exactly behaving in the same way and telling lies to him in most of the cases, consequently, he is not happy at all and is always full of doubt about others. As a matter of fact, If he did not tell lies, he would feel happier and increase his life quality.
Secondly, a first lie will obviously result in a series of lies and a stressful life. In fact, if people try to tell lie, they will be forced to tell more lies because they do not like to face problems and the truth. My own experience is a compelling example of this story. When I was 25 years old, I met a girl and fallen in love with her. She was from a rich family, however, I was just an ordinary person and my family was not at the same economic level of hers. At that time I exaggerated a lot about my profession and the properties that we have. But, It was not the end of my erroneous life story, and I was forced not to be honest with other parts of my life. As a result, I made a totally false character of myself for her and when she found everything, we broke up. It shows that telling lies will lead to other wrong actions and we will face a stressful life.
In sum, above from aforementioned opinions, I do believe that being honest is essential in our relationships and must serious considerations take into account. This is because of that a first lie will bring a series of lies and also it will decrease our happiness and quality of life. That's why we should be aware of all thing that we say.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'tell'.
Suggestion: always tell
...ife. In other words, when people try to tell always the right things about the events, they...
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Line 7, column 286, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ease our happiness and quality of life. Thats why we should be aware of all thing tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as for, for example, in fact, as a matter of fact, as a result, first of all, in other words, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2109.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 475.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48756775823 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469473684211 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4147883971 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8636363636 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5909090909 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.95454545455 5.45110844103 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112749338565 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346928562325 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389828507397 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811532781225 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049607015739 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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