Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people believe that always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people because it increases trusts and reduces complexity in the interrelation. However, in my opinion I do not agree and think that speaking truth all time is necessary for strong bonding for following reasons.
First of all, expressing truth sometimes causes negative impact on pshychology and health of the other people. For example, two years ago, while my husband was in USA, my 1 year old daughters had some healh issues like high fever, ear infection etc. And I hide these from my husband because it would cause him stress, tension, and anxiety and could not able to concentrate on his job properly. In contrast, if I told the truth about these he would experience both mental and physical discomfort and in the long run would lead him more serious distress. Some practical conditions lead people to hide truth and it would create a sense of concern, love for others. Therefore, it might help in creating a strong relationship bonding.
Secondly, avoiding the truth is very beneficial to build a strong relationships between people in some cases. For instance, yesterday, my 6 years daughter baked a cake for us and she was very excited about this. But the taste of the cakes was very bad in taste. However, we all appreciated her that it was so yummy and ate with a lot of enthusiasm. If we express our real feelings, then she might be disappointed and frustrated. Our positive words might lead her to the task more carefully and eagerly and would be able to bake a very tasty cake.
In third, telling false in the relationship leads people to be more energetic. For example, I was very bad at mathematics in the higher secondary school. I feel frustrated and distracted from the studies. Neverthless, my mother always told that I was good at math and able to secure good marks in the final exam though she knew my weakness. From her words, I felt that I might be good and worked hard and then I secured 99% percentile in the exam. If she told the truth that I was bad at mathematics, I certainly would not able to do that. It would lead me to face more negative consequences. Hence, avoiding truth often helps people to be more motivated.
In conclusion, it can be said that speaking certain types of white lies helps people to build strong relationship. In a research of Oxford University, London shows that telling false in certain circumstances helps people to promote a better relationships.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation in any relationship between people because it increases trusts and reduces ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'relationship'?
Suggestion: relationship
...th is very beneficial to build a strong relationships between people in some cases. For insta...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...people to build strong relationship. In a research of Oxford University, London shows that...
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Line 9, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd University, London shows that telling false in certain circumstances helps peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thus, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79176201373 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77731943405 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517162471396 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2759246379 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.25 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2083333333 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15925022617 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479928751583 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718312030995 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113551623289 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102529904363 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation in any relationship between people because it increases trusts and reduces ...
^^
Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'relationship'?
Suggestion: relationship
...th is very beneficial to build a strong relationships between people in some cases. For insta...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 119, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...people to build strong relationship. In a research of Oxford University, London shows that...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd University, London shows that telling false in certain circumstances helps peo...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thus, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79176201373 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77731943405 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517162471396 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2759246379 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.25 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2083333333 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15925022617 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479928751583 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718312030995 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113551623289 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102529904363 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.