Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people think that in twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today because of increasing awareness of people. However, I disagree with this statement and think that in the next technological era, people will be more interested using cars for the following three reasons.
First of all, the economic conditions of the people are improving day by day, and for these reasons, they want to buy cars. For example, when I was a teenage age, my parents had no car, but now, they can earn more money and buy cars. In contrast, if people do not have enough money, then they might not have the ability to support this. It is natural that if resources are available, the demand forces to make it real. After fulfilling all the basic needs, one might want to enjoy some luxurious facilities like going for groceries, traveling through driving own car.
Secondly, the cost of the car is going down because of the usage of advanced technological instruments. Car manufacturing companies are now focussed on quality cars at low cost and make targets towards middle-class people. In every society, the number of middle-class people is relatively larger. For instance, tata nano car price is so low that in India, the majority of the people has these cars. On the other hand, if the company not able to manufacture it in a small amount of cost and energy-efficient way, then it would be difficult for middle-class people to afford it. Moreover, car manufacturers are focussed people's attention to make environmentally friendly cars, e.g. avoid the emission of harmful substances.
In third, the public transportation services deteriorated day by day, and people found it problematic. Therefore, they are eager to use private car. For example, in the last week, I waited more than one hour for a public bus, and eventually, I could not reach the office on time. It happens to my other coworkers too. But, if the public transportation systems are up to the mark, people will be enthusiastic about it. In the next few years, there is no hope of improving it. The government, people are so reluctant in these issues. A recent survey of New York University shows that the number of car users is increasing at 10% every year in the USA.
In conclusion, it can assert that in the next twenty years, the number of cars in use will increase because of the advanced economies, technological factors, and degradation of public service transportation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'making'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: making
...ources are available, the demand forces to make it real. After fulfilling all the basic...
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Line 7, column 491, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...no hope of improving it. The government, people are so reluctant in these issues....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, e.g., first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87828162291 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87514126726 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515513126492 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6551168565 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9090909091 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0454545455 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13636363636 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193001409704 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559784428362 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796456364201 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135004085371 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117263476952 0.0645574589148 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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