Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Having relationship is very important for people to move forward in their life. In order to form good relationship at work, school, college, friends, teachers, a person's honesty and integrity plays a huge role. While some people believe that truth is not the most important consideration in any relationship, others believe it is. I believe honesty and truth is very important in any kind of relationships for two main reasons.
First, being honest with people increases trust which helps in long run as you can rely on each other. For example, if there is couple in love then truth is a very important factor in the relationship because the couple trust will keep on increasing throughout the years and ultimately they can get married and have kids. This developed trust over the years due to honesty will assure you that your child will be in good hands of your partner. Another example, people who apply for graduation in United States should submit an honest and truthful application. Because, if the student faked a project he did in undergraduation and got admitted in the graduation school because a professor was interested in the project that the student did in his undergraduation only to find that it was false, this could lead to potential harmful grades for the student in the graduate program and forming a bad relationship with the professor as well as the university.
Second, telling truth in any relationship will help you grow better and the other party involved to grow too. For example, if an employee working in a group made a mistake at a job and choose to come forward with it. He would have help of the gorup to rectify the problem and that way your experience will grow as well as the company would benefit, as the problem will be solved quickly. Another example, at a university having truthful conversations with your classmates can help you form better friendships. These friendships can be useful to search a job after the university. Trustful friends are more likely to provide you with information on a job opening that many people dont know about. This could contribute to a students professional growth significantly.
In conclusion, i agree that telling truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people because, it increases trust among each other and also it will help you grow better academically and professionally.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: a student; students
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1997.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9925 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89909360835 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4925 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.0396922816 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.470588235 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5294117647 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219428925101 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779781418558 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674325843725 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164187132354 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615502123082 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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