Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the dawn of the civilization people were trying to be well-organized. I adhere to the idea that since modern life is very complicated, it is crucial for young individuals to have ability to plan and organize. In what follows, two conspicuous reasons will vindicate my standpoint.
To begin with, of course there are some who argue that children and also young people should not be well-organize as they are not having responsibility. I think this is a misleading idea. As cities are growing up and becoming more convoluted, individuals understand the importance of planing; consequently, they teach planing to their children. Moreover, young people know that they are live in chaotic city; hence they try to learn the ability of planing and organizing which help them to be more independent. As they become more independent their confidence will upsurge. I think my own experience is compelling example for illuminating my idea. When I was a little boy, my mother taught me to be disciplined by doing some jobs like preparing my own meal. Furthermore, since I always saw the traffic in the street, I knew that I live in a tortuous city. As a result of living in complex city, I tried to become more well organize; therefore, I became very independent and do all of my jobs by myself.
Furthermore, when young people try to obtain the ability to plan and organize, they will become responsible. As young individuals try to be well-organized, they accept their mistakes. For instance, my mother taught me how to cook and our plan was that I should bake a bread on day in a week; hence, I cook by myself.
After learning cooking, on week I forgot to bake a bread.My mother ask why I didn’t accepted that since having ability to plan and organize make me to be responsible.
In conclusion, I subscribe to the idea that in modern life young individuals need to have the ability to plan and organize. This is because its help them to be more independent and more responsible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, of course, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77842565598 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99826410975 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481049562682 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5148432808 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0555555556 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20044774632 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679615547097 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699953681843 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132819020657 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397874632206 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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