Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The life is complex in the new era. As many people may agree that life in the past was rather simplier. New pressure lay on the shoulders of modern people,as well as the diverse challenges. The boom of information expose modern people , especially the young , to the huge amount of information and lures. It’s undoubtedly essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize in morden life.
First of all , the ability to plan for our lives can better prepare us for the uncertainty in the future. The pandemic , as the typical example of “black swan” events in recent years , brings a series of unexpected problems in everyone’s life. If we don’t have the ability to plan in advance and organize for the future , we may become more panic and hopless in face of uncertainty. Maybe someone will raise a question like “since there are always uncertainty beyond people’s plan , what’s the importance of the ability to plan and organize?”. From my perspective , the ability of plan and organize is more of an attitude than behavior. The aware of plan in advance can do ourselves a favour in emergency.
Subsequently, we need to seek for the essence in the life and focus on it , which can best manage our energy and reach our goal. It is the ability of planning and organizing that assist us to make wise choice. One of the feature of modern life is its fast pace. As young people in modern society , our time and energy is limited . Planning and organizing are the starts of goal-reaching.
Last but not the least , the ability of planning and organizing help us keep the simplexity in our mind. Though the life is evolving dramatically , though the pressure of modern life is quite exhausting for us , planning and organizing time for relaxing and staying with ourselves can make room for purity in our daily life.
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...make room for purity in our daily life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81761006289 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70214635687 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496855345912 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4798817056 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1111111111 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05555555556 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342093990937 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114350720251 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714389860094 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21910693362 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429442361962 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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